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Intro Story
by
Thorn
Open to any comments or critiques
This comic has been rated suitable for teens and up by its creator(s)
Uploaded August 06, 2026
Comments (12)
These were both such lovely comics, well done you too!
I love the colors in this they're so good. this was a fun intro to Koe and the flaming arm scar is cool.
Alright now it's my turn.
Messaging you was not enough, saying it in the server was not enough. Rose you fucking crushed it. You made such a great fucking comic, I love your style, I love the marker colors, I love the dialog. And I VERY MUCH LOVE THAT YOU READ HER LORE AND SAID "NAH, YOU KNOW WHAT? GIMME THE GRAND ORDER REFERENCES, LEMME SHOW THEM TOO." Like- YOU WENT THE EXTRA MILE AND YOU BLEW MY MIND WITH EACH NEW PAGE. I LOVE how Koe is so clearly using Sojiin or appears to be, but you can see that Sojiin's enraptured to the point where she's stumbling over herself to try and stay close to her. I love it. This was such. A. Good. BATTLE.
I mean it when I keep pushing back on you saying I'm gonna win, we both made bangers, and I truly do think you went the extra mile with additional story - 3 FUCKING DIMENSIONS SHOWED UP IN THIS ENTRY, THAT'S WILD.
Thank you for being my first scar match opponent, thank you for being so supportive and THANK YOU FOR CREATING KOE. SHE'S AMAZING AND I CANNOT WAIT TO WORK WITH YOU MORE IN THE FUTURE!!!
So either a wicked flame arm or a sick ass tattoo? Seems like a win win to me!
I like this a lot, pretty much everything about it- the colors, the story, the characters, all of it is just so charming! I definitely want to see more of this character in the future!
AHhhh, I love your style so much! Page 6 just had me howling; I was having SUCH a fun time reading this. Koe’s manipulative tactics are so masterful?? She didn’t need to say a single bad thing to give herself away to the reader; it’s all in the small details. Her expressions, and the way she didn’t miss a beat when it came to using Sojiin to get what she really wanted. A way out, haha.
I love her so much
I would say poor Sojiin but like… who doesn’t want a hot demon girlfriend? Maybe you can fix her?? You guys even got matching fire arms!!
ALSO, I HAD TO DOUBLE-TAKE. I missed it the first time reading it, but I see you did sneak in Cadenza hehe. Thank you so much!!
Love the dynamic you’ve given these two, its super fun! The flaming arm scar is a really cool idea and I like how it parallels Koe’s design, tying them both together visually. The colors in general really pop here, visually it looks superb. I’m really curious what plans Koe has in mind now that she’s arrived in the Void Lands. Great as always (thanks for the cameo!)
I love that you used this to double as an intro story for Koe!! Hell yes (pun intended hehe). Also, LOVE the scar! Flame arm is such a cool idea. And speaking of flames, I love the way you colored the flames! Makes em look kinda magical :3
With this being effectively an intro for Koe, I think you did a great job at conveying her personality! Outwardly to Sojiin she seems like she's helping, but there are just little moments that make it seem like she's not quite on the up and up lol. Like when she hesitates just a moment before helping Sojiin, as if she's calculating whether or not it's worth it to help. And then at the end when she goes through the portal, I was halfway expecting it to close before Sojiin made it through--which, I get the feeling Koe was halfway expecting that too. something tells me this demon doesn't have the best intentions :3
also Roasted Calamity and kissy lips Gohm fuckin killed me lmao
ALSO ALSO thank u for the lil Zhanic cameo! <3
YURI x2!!!
This is such a cool entry - I've always been fond of the idea of scars coming from a friendly/non-malicious place for scar matches, and it's done super well here. I also really loved the expressiveness and colors all throughout!
Overall, great work! (And ty for the little Mayumi cameo, tee hee :3c)
These really are just likely two competing glurge lesbians vs disaster lesbians narratives haha. Also thank you both for the cameos.
Time to mash our baddies and see who walks out on top!
may the baddest bitch win 😤