CONGRATS ON SOME FUN COMICS!!

Tinn: I really appreciate your commitment to having Varrick interact with so many of the others. It makes the world feel so lively and fun, and seeing him be nice to Mitsu is such a bonus!! The ending is really interesting👀👀 I see that to-do list. You're gonna end up very busy soon

Jcee: Beautiful comic! It had such a sweet vibe the whole way through. The ending page with everyone hanging out was especially lovely ❤️

Cab: Short but sweet! It felt like you punched me in the face with how we immediately jumped right back to the present day. I FEEL SO BAD FOR HER. GET HER OUT OF THERE.

Fuu: I love seeing more of your world-building! I knew going into this comic that I was going to end up feeling sad, and BOY did you deliver, haha. But I also really loved the dynamic between Mitsu and Eunyoo. It's soooo sweet.

ALSO, REIMI CAMEO!! THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR INCLUDING HER!! I miss her every day.

Mixie: Congrats on the comic! A fully colored comic is a ton of work, and I'm so glad you're getting to draw more of the things you enjoy!

noooo Ryu! Don't take candy from strangers!! /j

Nice job once again Tinn! You have a nice simple concept here and you execute on it pretty well. Again it is hard to crit, but if you want it my only advice for this one is to focus in more on your core idea and try pushing it further. For example I think you could have involved Mitsuko in more of the cameo interactions, to show her mood improving over time. You could also have used a bit longer introduction for Mitsuko in the beginning that really showcases how lonely and miserable she is, so that the payoff for getting shown around by Varrick is more powerfully felt.

Anyways that's all, keep up the good work! Your ending got me real hype to see more!

These were such fun reads! gonna put everything in one comment as to not spam too much

TINN- Loved the interactions between Varrick and the others! Specially with Felix and Mitsuko, it was very sweet until it wasn't at the end. I'm intrigued!

JCEE- I am floored with the inking and detail in the backgrounds! Absolutely stunning! The expressions and body language are so endearing and adorable! THANK YOU SM FOR FEATURING ELLIOTT AND IVY AA! Swan's interactions and dynamic with those two make my heart all squishy! I've started at those panels for so long aaaaaa!

CAB - Man, the ending shattered the whole interactions in a really good way. Pretty good punch in the gut, I dig it! Wondering if Miranda will get out of prison

FUU- Lovely moody palette and inking as usual- the dialogue and interactions between your characters were pretty entertaining to see. I'm starting to wonder if we will see an reunion between the siblings down the line

MIXIEMON- Making a full color comic is always hard work, specially with the amount of detail and patterns Bembé and Marino have. Hats off!

This came out so good!!!

Loved the Sojiin cameo! And I love how down to Earth Varrick is! So much humanity within someone that is referred to as a "glitch."

Absolutely fantastic work! Can't wait to see what comes next for Var!!!

Thanksies for the bembe cameo. This was a nice reflection piece for varrick.