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Run.
by
Tinn
Merc Work.
In-depth critique preferred
This comic has been rated suitable for teens and up by its creator(s)
Uploaded June 08, 2026
Comments (4)
Man, you have this marked for critique but its hard to say anything bad about it. Tons of action, a hint of backstory, and a moral twist at the end that plays out pretty successfully- there's not much more to ask for imo. Big respect Tinn!
If I am forced to critique something I will say that I felt the showcase of Varrick's reshape power was a little underwhelming. Mainly because it felt like he didn't need it. The enemies only used guns which he was shown to be immune to, and he is strong enough to tear guys apart with his hands with little effort. Not to mention the transformed truck and gun didn't really seem to do anything that he couldn't have just done with a normal truck and gun. Maybe it could be more impactful if you show how his reshape ability covers a weakness of his, or at least adds a unique advantage compared to the normal counterparts. For example i was kinda hoping a scene of the monster truck going around eating guys on its own, or the gun with teeth biting a guy or aiming on its own. That or if the robot was actually able to hold Varrick at bay before he could take control of it somehow.
Anyways great job, I hope to see more Varrick comics in the future!
Going to echo Platinumartist's words and say I really enjoyed the pacing and color usage here. Varrick's character development is well put on display here, and I'm curious to see how his story progresses.
Really impressive comic. Your ability to create at such a fast rate makes me envious honestly.
This is a solid comic. I like the methodic use of color as it is related to the character in question. Nice pacing and solid backgrounds. A super fun read!!! You did great!!!