Awesome work guys! This is a really funny comic! It was impressive to me that you were able to land good jokes and silliness on nearly every page, while still keeping the story relatively grounded and without breaking character. Also, thanks so much for your extended cameo of Choko! Your depiction of her having a soft spot for these young heroes is delightfully wholesome. Love it!

On my own part, I want to thank Platinumartist for all his work, and I am really grateful his own contribution. I especially appreciate his contribution on the dialogue. It made things pop in place better than I planned. Most of all it shines on page 12 with the (at least in my head) slight Southern accent and detailed expression on Kismet.

I'd also add that the "Suspect Profiles" are mostly Plat's work, and I wanna thank Techno for pointing out details that even I missed on the first view. That really is the sort of work that only gets better the more you look at it. From what I wrote, I didn't expect the art skill difference between Mary and Conduit to even be noticeable, but Plat managed to make it stand out visually by themself. Kudos for that.

Also, none of this would have been possible without Plat's excellent thumbs. I know some of those dynamic scenes were hard work on you, but you did great and your thumbs did essentially 75% of the work on my part. I really appreciate it.

RAHGGG this is such a cute and fun comic!! The writing and banter was especially good - Mole, you really have a strong grasp on comedic writing! "Look at the glint in those large eyes" being paired with Felix's literal hollow expression sent me into hysterics when I first saw it, lol.

Your use of both Choko and Ghost were just great in general. Ghost getting downed by Conduit's radioactive blood was a super cool moment!

I really enjoyed the small details of characterization here, too! Felix carrying the forklift ready to throw down in the background of page 12 was hilarious, but what really sticks to me is the suspect profiles on page 10. It's a subtle detail that I only noticed around my second or third time reading it, but I noticed that they're both using art programs - Mary, who has a good grasp on art already, has a clear and polished suspect sketch, while Conduit clearly struggled, making a bunch of practice doodles and scribbles on the side to try and get used to it. It's a delightful little detail!

I just want to put out there that it was quite an experience working alongside MoleratOfTheHat. Although I did drop the ball on some things, I hope everyone who reads our story and gives Mole a round of applause as they are a pretty good writer and artist. I hope to see more from them in the near future. and Thank you Mints for lending me Kismet for this venture.

The kids are fighting.

time to see who truly has the heart of a hero here