this is such a fun comic, the bright colors and your cute way of drawing and depicting all the characters, even the bad guys, gives me joy. I also appreciate that you are building off of the vcpd robot bigotry haha. I'm really curious to see where this Armageddon 2023 narrative is headed. Congrats on the win!

you're setting up something fascinating here and I can't wait to find out what it is!!!! 👀👀👀👀👀👀

First off good job on both teams making these fun to read comics, especially props to team Plat & Mole to submitting even a incomplete comic is better than no comic, you all did such great work and made such funny comics at times, I look forward to reading more comics from all the artists here.

yay great job on your comic!!

Mary Sue and Felix make such a strong team! I really enjoyed the time we spent with your opponents’ characters at the beginning, before your duo steps in to save the day. Your styles complement each other well, and I thought the heroes all came out so likable and charming. It’s especially nice to see Mary Sue’s unique coloring style

One small note for future comics: I noticed that several pages had minor fill issues, such as panels with unfilled white space or small gaps in characters' coloring. It didn’t take away from my overall enjoyment, but those details can add up and are p easy to fix and add a lil polish to the art overall

Good job on the comics, teams! I’ll try and leave more in depth comments later ✨

I love how mary sue is in a different medium. This was a fun train action scene.

Wonderful stuff all around. I can't even pick favorites. The colors, the the lines, and I especially liked the facial expressions on all characters. But if I got to pick, pages 4 and 7 sure were a treat when it comes to expressiveness and the fluidity of the action>

Though, I came to appreciate page 15 more for all the subtle details which, once again, I had to reread to pick up on, like Serath sneaking away and Felix (accidentally?) ripping the other robot's arm off.

I also really dig the way you guys interpreted Conduit's design, with the green vest being above the white overalls instead of beneath. Man, that looks so good I might consider changing his design again just for that.

I just want to put out there that it was quite an experience working alongside MoleratOfTheHat. Although I did drop the ball on some things, I hope everyone who reads our story and gives Mole a round of applause as they are a pretty good writer and artist. I hope to see more from them in the near future. and Thank you Mints for lending me Kismet for this venture.

The kids are fighting.

time to see who truly has the heart of a hero here