Item: Felix Saves Someone
Rating: 3.96
Author: TechnoAlchemist & marrionberrypi

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Felix Saves Someone

by TechnoAlchemist, marrionberrypi

A Heart of Heroes prologue. marrionberrypi: Script, colors TechnoAlchemist: Sketches, inks

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Uploaded March 18, 2026

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Comments (8)

Pizza Man

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All-Rounder

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25d 4h ago

Great comic you two! Can't wait to see what you come up with in the tournament!

Fuu

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25d 10h ago

This was a cute read! Nice job you two.

Some minor nitpicks I had:

I felt like the dialogue in the beginning when Felix introduced himself to Adrianna/Mary Sue felt a bit unnatural? A little too specific with the age? Adrianna/Mary Sue didn't feel like how a 13 year old would talk but considering how out of place she feels and she isn't an ordinary person, it was probably intentional. Something I wanted to point out!

Overall, I do like the whole coloring style but I can't help but notice how....slightly translucent the lineart comes off. Like I'm able to spot out the color blocks underneath (or on top?) of the lines and its a bit distracting at times. If its the color of the lines you're trying to mess with, I would suggest trying to remedy that somehow.

Page 13 looks completely different in terms of lineart style (it appears digital instead of trad) before it reverts back to the original style...not sure if that was intentional or an oversight.

Overall, neat comic! I'm interested to see where you guys are going for the tournament.

Badger

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25d 13h ago

This was super cute! It's really interesting how Mary Sue / Adrianna is colored in a different style than the rest of the world. It feels intentional and makes her feel like she doesn't belong, in a sense? Very curious. Such a fun interaction, looking forward to what you both are cooking for Heart of Heroes!