Oh, I have got to fight this nun at some point.

I really like you sense of colors and pallete choice. the action was a bit muddled and I would suggest studying some action scenes from comics to help understand ways to make it more clear.

I have the sense that you've got a somewhat good understanding of color; at least as a way to use color to separate your figures for the sake of clarity. But there's several other factors here that undermine that understanding. I feel like you were going for a sort of gameboy classic aesthetic here. But the textures in the first panel just aren't a great example or usage. It's great that you used the first panel as an establishing shot of setting and character but I would have spent some more time on clearing up some of these background elements. The texture, the screentone effect here, is offputting. It's much too large and frankly a bit odd because you shrink it down in following panels. It feels very slapdash.

The next few panels are rather claustrophobic and really lessen the impact of any action that is meant to happen. I have the sense that you aren't confident in rendering full figures and even less with arms and hands. Most of the time the characters seem to be hiding their hands if only for the reason that you don't want to draw them.

I find it a little hard to guide you on how you could have approached the action scene, which is really the most pivotal part of this whole comic. While your panel work and your ability to guide the reader's eye have potential, your composition work leaves something to be desired here. I think the best advice I could give here is to maybe look up storyboards or study your favorite comics as to how they handle action scenes. As it is now the story just feels very disjointed with very little to connect the panels especially because they're so squished and there are no background elements.

OHH I love this character already

oh shit badass flail nun, this is epic

i already like this character!

The colors are really pretty in this, probably need to take notes on making sure comics aren't just, white. Its very soft on the eyes and I like it ! Good job on the comic as well

There she is!!!