Fuu: It's been said by basically everyone else but damn this was impressive for 24 hours! 23 is still super mysterious I'm left wondering what she'll be like in future comics! :O

G0ttam: ...Well dang it that just raises further questions!!! >:U

this was a funny little comic, the overthe top finisher was good

Fight Club Mania:

This was really awesome. I enjoyed it a lot. My critique here is be careful of using that digital crosshatching texture. It's a nice shortcut but it often threatened readability. Particularly on that second page where it feels somewhat muddled due to the limited palette and how the texture is even all the way. For a 24 hour comic, this is impressive work.

24 Hour Fool Special:

I'm not sure where I'd begin here. I guess it's some sort of meta joke but at the sacrifice to the rest of the comic. There could have been fun ways to handle that wall of text such as squishing it in the background behind the characters to indicate that he's just talking and rambling on and on while having the Fool character grow steadily more angry. But I feel like you really wanted us, the readers to really read that text and I'm not sure how entertaining it was meant to be.

MENTAL.

Don’t understand why you got into a battle with someone to do this strange info dump, break the fourth wall combo. Won’t speak for everyone but I definitely don’t think it’s funny

dude wtf was that? You get a battle with some one and do this???

Disclaimer: I am personally friends with Aki.

Please stop mentioning Aki/Clockwork Banana as though you know her, she isn't your friend and finds how you talk about her incredibly awkward.

Idk what else to say about this, it's very off-putting and I don't know why you didn't just keep the comic similar to the first page. At least you turned something in I guess.

FUU- I am absolutely blown away by how polished and detailed you went for a 24 hour battle! On top of 5 pages maintaining that quality! That is incredible, you're such a powerhouse! You fit a real good short story in such little time, No. 23 is so cool, I can't wait to see more!

G0TTAM- I do wish it was more about Francis and No.23 than about some rando breaking the fourth wall and going on about some of the character's lore that is off-site, even going as far as to mention other artists on it. I was wondering what Francis would do with the whole slurpee thing

I’m gonna be real, I don’t know what to really take away from this comic. It came off as less funny and more creepy to me tbh

Good job on getting something in, at least.

Idk who that clownass is but he's fucking dead for sure.