This came out so, so beautifully! This has such emotional depth and the use of colors among the grayscale is absolutely stunning work. I'm so invested in 23 and her story! Amazing work!

Fuu: It's been said by basically everyone else but damn this was impressive for 24 hours! 23 is still super mysterious I'm left wondering what she'll be like in future comics! :O

G0ttam: ...Well dang it that just raises further questions!!! >:U

how you did this in 24 hours is wild and impressive, great job

Fight Club Mania:

This was really awesome. I enjoyed it a lot. My critique here is be careful of using that digital crosshatching texture. It's a nice shortcut but it often threatened readability. Particularly on that second page where it feels somewhat muddled due to the limited palette and how the texture is even all the way. For a 24 hour comic, this is impressive work.

24 Hour Fool Special:

I'm not sure where I'd begin here. I guess it's some sort of meta joke but at the sacrifice to the rest of the comic. There could have been fun ways to handle that wall of text such as squishing it in the background behind the characters to indicate that he's just talking and rambling on and on while having the Fool character grow steadily more angry. But I feel like you really wanted us, the readers to really read that text and I'm not sure how entertaining it was meant to be.

YOOO this is absolutely incredible for a 24 hour match! This is a level of quality that I'd normally expect from a week long match, so you being able to pump out something so high quality in such a short amount of time is absolutely insane work. Good job!

Fuu your production quality is very clean and consistently well done! You are beast to pull this off in one day!!

note self, 23 is not to be messed with

I like your style so much man, lovely panel layout too, specially the one at the bottom of page 1.

In a short amount of time this was fantastic ! Beautifully done, the story was very fun to read too !

You did a fantastic job in such a short amount of time, I love the detail and all the care you put in despite that deadline! Keep up the fantastic work

Thats a sick comic!

Awesome job! Can't believe this was done in 24hr!!!

FUU- I am absolutely blown away by how polished and detailed you went for a 24 hour battle! On top of 5 pages maintaining that quality! That is incredible, you're such a powerhouse! You fit a real good short story in such little time, No. 23 is so cool, I can't wait to see more!

G0TTAM- I do wish it was more about Francis and No.23 than about some rando breaking the fourth wall and going on about some of the character's lore that is off-site, even going as far as to mention other artists on it. I was wondering what Francis would do with the whole slurpee thing

Hmmmm, scary! (That was a very fucking cool comic with the time you had hahaha)