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Direlgan Intro Story
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Salvage
Open to any comments or critiques
This comic has been rated suitable for teens and up by its creator(s)
Uploaded January 11, 2026
Comments (8)
Looks like you're cooking up an interesting villain! The first page of this comic sells your character instantly. The second page's final panel intrigues me though I feel like the panels that preceded it are a little too similar. I am left wondering if it would've been better if he started with a closed fist and then turned it upside down and had the lava-like creatures drip from his hand. I'm not exactly suggesting it would've been better because I do like the final panel but it's never a bad idea to experiment with multiple panel ideas. You conveyed a lot of information within a short amount of panels which is impressive. I'm looking forward to seeing what you got planned for this character!
Loving the design of this guy! He seems like a very intimidating foe, looking forward to seeing him cause some mayhem!
Ohh very interesting premise- I like the vibe on the background!
Ohhh I like him already.
Great work on this comic! The colors really stood out to me here - especially with how the brightness of his horns and gold stand out against the darkness of his body. The last page left me feeling very intrigued as well - hoping to see where this story goes next!
This guy has serious "Big Bad Guy" Vibes and I love it. Can't wait to see more!
I wanna fight him. Let's fight!
I love the colors and the introduction so much! It looks phenomenal!