Very nice expressions!

Im glad you had a lot of fun with this comic! Garland seems to be having the time of his life killing so many people askjadasd I dont know if I should be happy for him or fear him more now that his burnout has been resolved

Raltz- this is great and feels most like an NPC story- a mundane task that turns into something more exciting. I love the gif with Bach dancing. And I like the intermissions where we see what Envy (and Kano!) are up to. You got an impressive amount of pages done, it's all very readable and I like the expressions and emotions and the sloppy lines on the 'ew' word bubble on p26. Good work!

Radji- I love your little details, their desert house seems like a cozy enough place out in the desert. You couldn't get done but your sketches are still pretty readable, I like how you get right to the action. I fell in love with Franck and Lilou, it'd be neat to see some more from them soon.

Footini- It's the pool party comic! I like how it's too cold for swimming in yours as well. I love how you managed to include the characters from the other bracket! I like the detail of Saiko twisting Sizar's nipple while they fight, and how Satraxia wasn't mad about them fighting, but about how they weren't fighting ferociously enough. Lots of fun!

BuggyPumpkin- Sorry you couldn't turn in, I was looking forward to it!

Mixiemon- I like the scene and backgrounds in this one and the little vignettes of all the characters. I like how only Garland can see White Malkin it's a fun idea! And I love how dark it got at the end. I thought all the 'sweetie~'s were suspicious!

Me- I love doing comics with lots of opponents. I wanted to fit them all together but ended up with funnypart>seriouspart. Anyway the idea is White Malkin was the last of his kind so he went out to meet some lady cats and have babies until he finally made some magic kittens eventually! (I wondered if there should be a momma cat but my wife said it's cuter if he's a single dad.) It's a little cold in that alley but they'll be safe, don't worry~

Thanksies Batty. The whole “Sweetie” is meant to be a hypno trigger, Juniper repeating it so Garland can get into the headspace and fall deeper into the hypnosis.

Ooooh, I was not expecting that ending 👀 there were some really funny moments throughout, though, especially with Garland's expressions lol. I can really tell you had fun with them! Unfortunately, I think you kind of overdid it with the 'Sweetie's and 'Honey's--I think you could've gotten away with just having Juniper and Garland use a pet name for each other maybe once per page, instead of at least once per speech bubble, because it was so frequent that it kinda became distracting ^^; That said, the final page was really kickass, especially with all the weirdness that was going on with Juniper's eyes! Juniper and Garland are truly made for each other in the worst of ways lmao

Another comic that touches upon the zodiac! A real "I have two pennies" moment lmao.