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NPC Royale : Side B
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Radji
Had to abandon it due to IRL obligation taking most of my time, but here's some lore drop and what is supposed to happen, to help you understand what these two are up to:
Franck and Lilou, ex-nvcpd officers and Marie Karunen's only friends in the forces, joined the Desert Foxes, a private security group composed mainly of ex-cops of the Arena loyalists variety who pledged themselves to protect the wastelands around what is left of Void City.
Franck and Lilou, following some signalements, investigate a techno-ruins full of techno zombies, and find a clue to Marie's whereabouts in the form of ruins that their missing friends had placed to contain the zombies to the ruins.
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This comic has been rated suitable for all ages by its creator(s)
Uploaded December 17, 2025
Comments (5)
Love your style!
Raltz- this is great and feels most like an NPC story- a mundane task that turns into something more exciting. I love the gif with Bach dancing. And I like the intermissions where we see what Envy (and Kano!) are up to. You got an impressive amount of pages done, it's all very readable and I like the expressions and emotions and the sloppy lines on the 'ew' word bubble on p26. Good work!
Radji- I love your little details, their desert house seems like a cozy enough place out in the desert. You couldn't get done but your sketches are still pretty readable, I like how you get right to the action. I fell in love with Franck and Lilou, it'd be neat to see some more from them soon.
Footini- It's the pool party comic! I like how it's too cold for swimming in yours as well. I love how you managed to include the characters from the other bracket! I like the detail of Saiko twisting Sizar's nipple while they fight, and how Satraxia wasn't mad about them fighting, but about how they weren't fighting ferociously enough. Lots of fun!
BuggyPumpkin- Sorry you couldn't turn in, I was looking forward to it!
Mixiemon- I like the scene and backgrounds in this one and the little vignettes of all the characters. I like how only Garland can see White Malkin it's a fun idea! And I love how dark it got at the end. I thought all the 'sweetie~'s were suspicious!
Me- I love doing comics with lots of opponents. I wanted to fit them all together but ended up with funnypart>seriouspart. Anyway the idea is White Malkin was the last of his kind so he went out to meet some lady cats and have babies until he finally made some magic kittens eventually! (I wondered if there should be a momma cat but my wife said it's cuter if he's a single dad.) It's a little cold in that alley but they'll be safe, don't worry~
It looks like you had a really neat idea going into this, I'm just sad that life hit you to where you couldn't finish :( that first page is really good looking though!!
shame life happened but cool to see what you submitted~
I would have loved for luck to be on your side.