I absolutely loved the vibe of this, also I see you are improving in general, so congratulations on that!

It could be because Bach was playing sidekick for Tarot, but I was LOSING it the entire time I was reading this. It’s sooo funny, and you gave Bach and Cadenza such a sweet ending!! They had a better time here than I gave them, hahaha. Love it! Tarot might be just some guy, but I really like that little loser <3

Raltz- this is great and feels most like an NPC story- a mundane task that turns into something more exciting. I love the gif with Bach dancing. And I like the intermissions where we see what Envy (and Kano!) are up to. You got an impressive amount of pages done, it's all very readable and I like the expressions and emotions and the sloppy lines on the 'ew' word bubble on p26. Good work!

Radji- I love your little details, their desert house seems like a cozy enough place out in the desert. You couldn't get done but your sketches are still pretty readable, I like how you get right to the action. I fell in love with Franck and Lilou, it'd be neat to see some more from them soon.

Footini- It's the pool party comic! I like how it's too cold for swimming in yours as well. I love how you managed to include the characters from the other bracket! I like the detail of Saiko twisting Sizar's nipple while they fight, and how Satraxia wasn't mad about them fighting, but about how they weren't fighting ferociously enough. Lots of fun!

BuggyPumpkin- Sorry you couldn't turn in, I was looking forward to it!

Mixiemon- I like the scene and backgrounds in this one and the little vignettes of all the characters. I like how only Garland can see White Malkin it's a fun idea! And I love how dark it got at the end. I thought all the 'sweetie~'s were suspicious!

Me- I love doing comics with lots of opponents. I wanted to fit them all together but ended up with funnypart>seriouspart. Anyway the idea is White Malkin was the last of his kind so he went out to meet some lady cats and have babies until he finally made some magic kittens eventually! (I wondered if there should be a momma cat but my wife said it's cuter if he's a single dad.) It's a little cold in that alley but they'll be safe, don't worry~

I gotta agree with the others, the Earthbound references were super fun lmaooooo. At times this comic felt a bit like a fever dream, but I think that's kind of what you were going for so if that's the case you nailed it XD I imagine going anywhere in Void is a bit of a fever dream tbh

The earthbound stuff was awesome and this was fun.

I liked the Earthbound gag.

An average shopping trip in Void City. Can't grab the groceries without at least 5 random encounters