Snowy: A fun little comic strip! Love the old newspaper-type texture, and the suddenness of her question caught me off guard, lol.

Linclair: GODDD this silly little drum makes me ILL- Absolutely loved this comic! The textures and colors were all super interesting. I haven't read much of Cadenza's comics, but this managed to make me super invested in her via another perspective.

Selevan: As always, I love your inks and textures. Having it all shown from the same perspective was a super interesting stylistic choice.

Platinum: Super interesting to see some of Zavan's conflicting dynamics here!

Boogidi: It's pretty cool to see you experiment with your style like this! The first page was especially striking, with all the wild colors and lines.

Rockman: Love these silly worm wizards, lol. Seeing a bit more of Mob's dynamic with Mythra was a fun little addition, too!

I will properly comment later, but I LOVED this.

This is very impressive for 2 weeks! It is amazing storytelling with a lot of emotion! Very polished artstyle. Good job!

Snowy- Very cute, your lines are so clean! It'll be fun to see more from Kano

Linclair- Great tragic story, I didn't expect it to be so sad so that was fun. Great evil mom and I agree the 11th page with Cadenza growing up is great!

Salevan- I like the idea and the detailed coffee shop background you made! This seems like a peaceful day there, I bet sometimes a void coffee shop can get real raucous.

Platinumartist- This is some neat backstory showing Zavan being slightly distrustful of Viro at first. I didn't expect to see Saal! I like the longshot of the city burning, followed by a close-up of hands on bars in a dark cell.

BoogidiBzdo- Those first couple pages look amazing! I'd definitely like to see more traditional art from you-- it's bonkers but it never gets confusing or unreadable.

Rockman- Very fun read, an interesting look into an odd magical place in Void which is full of odd magical places. I like on page four where the little worm is pointing with its head in Mob's hand. Great work on all the backgrounds!

These were so fun to read! You all did great!!

SNOWY - I love how short, sweet and effective this was! Art is beautiful as usual and I love that we can see how cheeky Kano is. Your render and colors are so clean and crisp, makes me want to eat them!

LINCLAIR - I'm blown away with how much detail and how much story you wrote for Bach. It's such an incredibly tragic story seen from another point of view. Masterful writing and the art and greyscale is gorgeous. The way you portrayed passage of time and how Candeza changed through the years was so bittersweet. I hope the two can reunite someday

SELEVAN - Very sweet and simple, I love how all sort of characters stop by to breathe and get a shred of normalcy in the background. I really liked how the shot was static but so many different things were happening as the day went

PLATINUMARTIST - It's pretty interesting to see things from an NPC's point of view on how important stuff can potentially go down. I'd say that Saal took the spotlight from Zavan a little though.

BOOGIDY-I am absolutely amazed at how dynamic and colorful your (mostly) traditional (!!!!) comic is. You always bring something so unique and special to the table, there is no one that does what you do. I have such a deep admiration on how genuine and joyful your art is every time. Keep going Boogidy!!

ROCKMAN - This was such a fun read! I love how stylish Mythra and the lil worms look in your artstyle! The expressions are so fun (specially on page 3) and the backgrounds are lookin real good! I LOVE MOB AND MADD TRASH DIVING...the treasure hunting with these two yess! And also that last page with the colored worm in it- there's something about it that is so incredibly cool and appealing to me, it draws me in!

Beautiful comic, your art style and shading is so satisfying to look at! Didn't expect to feel emotional a bit about a lil drum :,]

What amazing writing and depiction of such a horrible mother. Im excited for bachs next move.

This is a truly impressive amount of effort for a two week battle. The visuals are stunning and the writing is incredibly sharp. Your quality of work is astounding

What a contemptible woman.

EXCUSE YOU HOW DARE YOU MAKE ME HAVE FEELINGS ABOUT A GODDAMN DRUM

also I need to throw Cadenza's mother off a tower now.

Your grayscales are fantastic, and all the art in general is just so tasty :D almost makes up for the emotional damage you subjected me to lmao