The Art style is really fun, and for a comic on paper I think you did great with all the paneling and structures!

very hard to pick a winner here, for both comics i felt the art was very well drawn, but had some trouble following the flow of the action.

Great job you two!

Thank you for the feedback and thanks for the tips I do wanna do more traditional I was going to use an ink pen as well I’ll try that more next time and the advice you gave me thank you!! SirJelly

As someone who has regularly photographed my own pencil art, I know it can be hard to do without a scanner, but if you have the time I implore you to make sure that the entire page is in focus as much as possible when photographing. Especially when the text is hand written as well. There's several places where the text begins to blur out a bit and when some of the oencil drawing starts to blend together due to the unfocused camera, and that can lose you a lot when you're working in pencils. And this is a very solidly drawn comic and I'd hate for it to score lower than it should for a technical issue rather than any actual issue with the artwork

Forgot to mention Gusano can burrow through any terrain this includes magma(lava)

I liked the expressions, the movement conveyed - Was a little hard to follow due to the lighting on the pages, and some of the dialog is hard to make out. But this was a fun read! Wasn't expecting the human to play such a huge role in the fight!

Marcelo 😭😭😭

Tremora: SOPA DE GUSANO, UMA DELICIA!

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