The Art style for this is, so, so, great. My only weird issue is the colors, sometimes it's a bit *too* hard to see the difference in the grey scaling but that very much could be just me! If wanted, maybe you could do a slight airbrush on the edges where you shade in the character underneath the lineart to help bring out some of the characters? Or a slight lighter outline, something like that could help if wanted, other than that very fun fight!

very hard to pick a winner here, for both comics i felt the art was very well drawn, but had some trouble following the flow of the action.

You did well with the illustration. There's some level of weight I can feel with the lineart, especially the background. Nice choreo as well!

Great job you two!

By and large this is a decent encounter. Decent combat, well drawn, very well polished, but it desperately needs more contrast between objects. Most objects are shaded in a very similar value of gray, and that makes things hard to distinguish guise, despite how clean your l8nework and spot blacks are. You really have to push the lighter and darker tones to makes the different elements of your scenes clearly distinguishable, and that will make it easier for the reader to parse what is happening, and will serve your inks and spot blacks much better, because they really are excellent

I really love how you did Gusano in your style Cyber 🤩🤩 it’s crazy I didn’t know you were going to do an underground cave as well! Great minds think alike!! I hope you enjoy my part as well!! I’ll still ink it and all but it was fun facing against tremora love drawing her!!!

This art is so unbelievably polished, I wish I knew your secret! The speed paint was a nice glimpse into the process. Tremora is awesome as always and I loved how you put them on equal footing for most of the fight with it being in Gusano's domain underground. At times it was difficult to follow where everyone was but none-the-less I loved EVERY second of the fight c:

Marcelo 😭😭😭

Tremora: SOPA DE GUSANO, UMA DELICIA!

BUG BATTLE BUG BATTLE BUG BATTLE 👏👏👏