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THE ENEMY OF MY ENEMY
by
roradraws
Nohuron survived. After her run in with Kezias, the voidborne beast has been roaming the Voidlands freely. She's found her way into a hidden facility deep within the Technodome and her signal went stagnant long enough for Claude and his people to track her down. However, there is another party that has tracked her down as well.
Open to any comments or critiques
This comic has been rated suitable for teens and up by its creator(s)
Uploaded November 07, 2025
Comments (20)
Nohuron has been defeated, I'll be dropping a Beyond that re-contextualizes the comic's ending so she is not successful in defeating the other two. The multiverse can breathe a sigh of relief, the queen has lost.
It was a pleasure facing off against @DoeFR and @thewkhangkbon! Seriously. The comics you all made were incredible and I've learned a lot. Can't wait to see what you both do, and thank you so much for the opportunity.
Seriously, are you three superhuman??? It's also funny that they all involve the two duos teaming up against Nohuron.
Gorgeous comic! The use of motion blur here is really striking, especially combined with the standard comic motion lines. The fast pace of the story matches perfectly with the pace of the action.
This one was really hard to vote, I was moving the bar up and down, these 3 comics had I honestly had a hard time deciding because they were really close, and honestly I don't know what should I critique, there's obviously points of improvement on all of them, but I'd need to look at them slowly and very focused to take my time and write up something useful, which is something I saddly didn't have a lot of this week.
What I'm saying is that all of you did an outstanding job, congratulation
VERY COOL FIGHT!!! Nohuron modifying her body is such a cool and terrifying power. I'm not sure if Claude and Roel felt quite in character, but having them compete with Behemoth and Nomad was a pretty clever way to even the playing field so Nohuron could get a bit of an upper hand. I think I would have liked to see the other two team up against Nohuron from the start even if they didn't fully trust each other, and maybe the distrust creates an opening rather than the other two kaiju outright fighting each other? The more I can connect with character motivations and how they drive the action, the more impact your comic is going to have on me, and I think that goes for a lot of readers! Nevertheless, I thought this was a very fun and action-packed comic, I enjoyed the variety of angles and switching between long camera shots and close-ups, and overall think this comic is a step in the right direction! Your last comic was great, and this one is better, and I can't wait to see what's next! Also thanks for featuring the Technodome; it always makes me smile when other artists find it an interesting enough location to make use of :D
Can't believe the improvement from your first comic to this one, congrats!
This was the hardest round to vote for a winner, respect to you 3!
Congratulations to all three of you for delivering the most kaiju-flavored battle of the round, with all three submissions. This kaiju fan is feasting
@thewkhangkbon
I will be brief as you requested no crits, kudos for being able to deliver another full color comic for the round
@roradraws
You've improved on every avenue from the last round and that's great to see. The surprise of Nohuron's adaptation for the battle was a great new twist that kept the fight fresh. You did a good job showing how formidable Nohuron is. The sound effects especially are on point and should be noticed by others. Keep experimenting with line work, you still have some ways to go with word ballooning but there is an improvement. If you keep improving like this with each new battle it's gonna be wild how your work will look a year from now
@doe
Yes it is still a kaiju comic! Your worldbuilding is absolutely engrossing, you were able to seamlessly weave your opponents into your characters' universe to great success. I have my theories about what the memories are hinting at in the end, consider me hooked. It does feel like you stretched yourself a bit with this submission: For as vivid and imaginative as the compositions and paneling are, the lineart is rougher and looser than last round's. Time probably got in the way of refinement, but I know you have it in you under ideal conditions, and am hungry for more on the world of Claude and Roel
Damn, what a round!
Thewkhang, your action shots never disappoint! Really liked pg10 especially.
Rora, wasn't expecting the copy ability from Nohuron, that was extremely hype
DoeFr, love how your comics contain such a compelling narrative, leaves me wanting more
Truly inspiring work from all involved
You all did such a fantastic job in two weeks time! These were all such great reads!
Finally in the right professional headspace to give my comments! First of all you guys really popped off, You three did an outstanding job. in this round 2 entry the three way fight really stands out the most cause' not only are these visually stylish and clean but also the contrast of the story too, and it works perfectly well as 3 different scenarios.
Thewkhangkbon, your comic is incredibly clean and your unique artstyle made it worked. The fight showing that in a 3 was fight, a helping hand for one of the combatants helps finishes a type of fight that prolongs in terms of attrition, unity is all it takes. Behemoth's special divine attack in the 3rd act makes the perfect conclusion! a good ending overall and an intriguing cliffhanger.
DoeFR, in this three-way fight your story here stands out as the most intriguing, from start to finish the fight is well made, a coordinated fight to stop a living nightmare sets the mood that Nohuron is truly an existential threat and poses a stronger antagonism in the story. The portal sequence fight is the coolest thing I've ever seen here, and Claude being morally challenged by the Nomad at the end is so compelling, shows that despite even their unity in this fight, their fundamental differences is still there. The ending makes me excited for more future works from you!
Roradraws, your comic works so well in the PoV of Nohuron, although the comic initially began with Claude and Roel as Nomad and Behemoth came for the save, Nohuron displays how truly dangerous she is when her cunning nature is fully utilized. I've always looked forward to the unique ability it was hyped up and to see it finally shown was jawdropping. This is a win that favors Nohuron because even a lack of coordination is shown, her element definitely works best when all enemies are at eachother's throats, and that is the fighting chance Nohuron needed: Unity is too late, and their synergy is disorganized. That small fracture is all it takes.
Nohuron's enemy making a team up is nice! Unity is the most fascinating thing to witness, BUT since the match is essentially supposed to be a 1v1v1, your comic follows the true three way fight because the 3 were not picking sides, and this proves that it takes real team play effort to truly defeat an intelligent nightmare like Nohuron.
Really interesting story, I love seeing how Nohuron adapts to her opponents! The art was quite good too, nice work!
I can’t believe the drawing time was only 2 weeks? You all did an amazing job and I am very impressed!
This is a very solid action comic. 3 way matches can be a challenge to integrate all 3 characters into a plotline but that seems to have presented no problem to you (or any of the members of this battle, honestly). Managing to balance all three characters so well and still find time to expand upon Nohuron without it feeling out of place or forced is definitely a feat.
you three are NUTS. all this work in just 2 weeks? absurd.
I prayed to the OCT gods that if I got eliminated in round 1, that I wanted to see the Nomad and Behmoth vs. Claude and Roel. and they answered my prayer. then they put a cherry on top by making all 3 possible dimension hoppers interact. of course, if I REALLY want to see what would happen I should just make my own commic about it.
each of y'all's takes on this play of characters was interesting in its own right! I'll get y'all your indivudual crits in a bit!
Funny how you made Behemoth's enterance literally getting his arm biten off by Nohuron and Roel lol!
The way you made Claude attack Behemoth, then use their banter to give time for Nohuron to digest Behemoth's arm and mimic his style!
Finally the ending. It's interesting how you made Nohuron escapes *wink*.
Oh I was not expecting this battle, genuinely terrifying of a character. She's so menacing, loved reading this comic!
A 3 way!? And the 3 opponents are solid contestants, good luck all.
Holy shit this is an extremely hype three way!!! I can't wait to see what y'all make!!!