Absolutely marvelous crap, you guys. Absolutely marvelous. I sez this one'll be real close.

Colussus, that was a crazy battle ! And Black cound't have been more satisfied to blow a man through a building with a shotgun. An awesome battle, I'm really sorry that I didn't do Coral justice. We shall cross steels again aye ? And Congratulations on your first battle. You did good

OMG!!!! I think i jus SH*T MY PANTS!!!!! that was friggin awsome from both of you! Keep it up!

Those are mega busy pages... too much to read. Coral: I like the sequences between panels and the Chopper was great! AB: dude I liked the story and i need to read it again to asimilate everything, pretty rough panels and the text all over the page... try to clean it next time.. these are action packed! good job guys...

Pt. 2 The only thing is that because of the huge amount of data the pacing is like a crawling traffic jam, SO much information to be absorbed. The only cure for this is more pages and panels to spread things out, but given that both of you only had three weeks, both submissions are AMAZING I remember reading each comic--each one!--and thinking \"the other guy is doomed\" In the end I gave you both A's for entertainment, Monday just edged out on the creativity due to the huge amount of complex ideas and sequences he is getting onto the page. Quality is a non-issue with me

Pt 1: Ahh.... ah... it's like Christmas..... Colussus had the crazy camera angles/fight choreography/pacing straight outta and beyond Hollywood. He's from Sweden so English might not be his first language, but the few grammatical errors fade into the background with the intense action. Monday had the INSANE detail in both the art inking and the art concept (the panels are taped on near the beginning!!) AND the story which is so dense and rich that it makes a re-read inevitable. He leaves little things like the \"9999 [damage]\" when Coral goes through one of the cosplayers. It's a reader's field day.

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Shnaps is the word here! You are both amazing Colossus: amazing battle, your layout is easy to follow and the black, and gray tones are exciting. Bit too much empty space in some frames. Your use of perspective certainly gives you an edge- I can see you pushing it even more. Monday: your work is also amazing, you use the space on the page very well. And although I love the hand written work, I find your story hard to follow, I am not sure if it is the amount of writing or my inpatients. The arena image on the 2nd page is breath taking and i truly appreciate it. You both have very dynamic lines and a lot of energy! Great Job!

Coral kick ass! Colussus your fight also kick ass :D I find Mondays figth hard to follow, all the text ruined the comics rate :(

OMG Monday!!! I love your comic, you caught Coral SO WELL!!! And she's really cute too X3

Holy shit. You guys both just rocked my brain. I'm gonna need a minute. Okay, done. Colossus - Intensely dynamic fight. You have real skill with action-packed perspective, even if the bendy lettering seemed over done just a bit. The use of tones was awesome, but the near-completeness of your piece made the few anatomical errors stick out that much more. Nevertheless, it was a downright bad-ass fight. Monday - Awesome entry on your side as well. I like the fact that you hand letter your comics, but maybe you should plan it out in pencil first? There are a lot of scratch outs, and they really distract from your story. A few weird poses here and there, and a few confusing panels, but overall it kicks major ass. I gave my votes to Colossus by just a point. I insist on seeing more from the tow of you. EPIC FIGHT.

HAWT SAUCED ! LETS START THIS SHEEIIT

UPPLOOOAADED THE SHIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!! YAY FINALLY..........

Yeah !! finished ! Good luck on your Entry Collossus , can't wait to see it !

Monday, you're an animal - your insatiable lust for NEVER STOPPING is astounding. Colussus, I really like your character - I look forward to this one, for sure!

2 weeks huh ? don't wory about me, The gabrino fight was two weeks long, and I * managed* to do enough of the story. . . however, I do have majr plans for this one, So i better get cracking on the halfway point this weekend.

Woah! 2 weeks left. Well I can say now I have done A LOT of pages in 5 days O_o!, I need to ink these shit in this coming week, and I'm not sure if I will tone the pages. But how it's going, Monday? Everything going well? ^^ Bless, Colussus

I Would like to apoligive to wei in advance. I'm sure this is going to be hell for you to put up on the directory

One to watch!

I wanna see costumes~ haha

sleep is overrated anyways >P cant wait to see this >)

T_T thats what I'm afraid of . . . . now im never gonna get any sleep

Give me your best SHOT!!

Sure, =D

Let's give these people something to read about during halloween aye ?