Dekkard: I'll be honest, I didn't look at Takame's profile before reading this so I honestly just assumed that your character was an abnormally large but ultimately normal woman at first, lol. Enjoyed the variety of angles and her characterization throughout this!

Cybermananon: I loved the textured look you gave throughout all of you pages! The fight scene between the two was stellar as well - you used Tremora's webbing creatively and all the action flowed together very nicely :]

@ Dekkard

I like the variety of shots you’ve got going here, including some lower angles that are quintessential for kaiju cinema to give the sense of scale of monsters, and points for getting a full color comic out. The most glaring issue to me that you can easily fix in your next battle is your resolution: start drawing in larger canvases with higher resolution, and when you export those pages they will come out looking sharper

Keep it up!

@ Cybermananon

Welcome back, and what a great comeback comic this is! Action readability is among the best of Round 1, and when I saw how much effort and intricacy you put in Tremora’s design I was excited to see that go into play in combat and I wasn’t disappointed. I have to also applaud you for having so much building background work throughout the comic, that is not easy to accomplish and it’s generally one of the things that hold many artists back from urban environment kaiju battles. While I would have liked to see more life on the ground floors that the monsters battled (cars, signs, trashcans, etc.) I still give you points for trying to go the distance all the same. It really helped liven the fight even more and cemented that these were giant monsters whose every movement affects the world around them. Excited to see more Tremora in the future

As a fan of arachnids and insects this one hit the spot for me! Loved your entry man! The art was great and the action kept me on the edge of my seat! Hope to see more of Tremora!

Masterfully done fight! The action would be right at home in a manga. You made the most of both opponents' abilities, and the destruction of the environment made this story feel so much more grounded. The fact that you did this in two weeks is remarkable, and I fear for your wrists.

Oh this was one of my favorites from this round! A classic Kaiju fight, with a great balance of showing off each fighter's unique strengths and weaknesses! I'm impressed at how long it is, and without skimping on backgrounds! The premise that Takame showed up after the city was already being evacuated because of Tremora is a fun detail that feels like exactly the kind of thing that would happen in this tournament! I'm really looking forward to more!

The manga energy of your entry is incredible

Un-fucking-real that this was done in 2 weeks. Holy shit, this was a treat to see. VERY good job on this one, Cyber!

This is a bery impressive entry, given the time limit and the consistent quality of the work. I think others have already covered the good qualities of your work pretty well, so I'll just say I'm looking forward to what you have in store next

cyberman anon, WHO ARE YOU? why are you so powerful!?

You made Takame look so cool. the anatomy of her muscles and ass with the shadow marks is so beautiful. and using a talking kaiju to help introduce us to Tremora was such a great writing choice! I love the way Takame is written in contrast to Tremora. The line about not wrecking too many homes was great. The fight choreography was very easy to follow and engaging while subtly showing off Tremora's weaknesses and powers. you went so hard on this! I'd love to fight you and would be pleased to see Tremora take the whole tournament. more spider love!

I really like the style of your art, and the action was phenomenal! I do think the text itself could be a bit smaller, it feels too big for the comic. I'm really interested in how the story would continue, very nice work on this!

An awesome battle and a gruesome end to the opponent

I love your grayscale and all the texture in the comic. Its a treat seeing your art.

I think out of the ones I've read so far, this is probably my favorite one, the ending is so interesting. Loved how both characters had a hand in beating eachother up, the texturing in the background, the story, I think this is visually great!

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