Spartan: Incredible art and visuals! Seeing him transform on page 3 was genuinely super cool to see. Love your work!

Charlinear: A fun and silly comic! I love your use of geometric lines and shapes as a part of your artstyle. "The whole fight that didn't happen took up a lot of time" genuinely made me chuckle, lol.

This is a really solid presentation, excellent layouts, good writing. Art's punchy and got a lot of momentum and energy. Differentiating the dialogue bubbles with black and white was a good idea, though it might still be good to add tails (for example that panel where they're grappling threw me off for a second). Looks great overall though!

Lol Nineteen coming in with his game! Though not exactly winning..

I see you're going strong with the pages! They look polished, and the interaction feels natural!

”Window shopping with an empty wallet is wild” is such a good line. It got a good chuckle out of me when I first read it haha

This was a good short read! Your action poses are really good and the humor is great. I do feel maybe some SFX additions could be more utilized in certain areas like where 19 is thrown through the window with the glass breaking or the smoke cloud activates when Sunny punches 19 as opposed to after the fact but those are just minor nitpicks 😅

im excited to see more 19 comics in the future! He’s such a fun guy~

SpartanArts19- Lovely colors and shading! The way you made the smoke part away to reveal the log was so tangible and good. I agree with Rockman, your action poses are crazy. Loved the way 19 came up from their eldricht form back into humanoid

Charlinear- The outline in the characters is so charming! The lil 4th wall break with the Shrek movie was super fun. Looking forward to more from you

Great backgrounds and action. Can't wait to see more of your stuff.

great artwork! Really impressed by how much you fit into each page.

19 is a fun character

I really like your action poses, they are super dynamic.

Wow, really enjoyed this one! Your work reminds me of old school VOID comics, in a good way. A good ol’ bump in the street resulting in an all-out brawl lol.

loved the ending and the humor, can’t wait to see more from you!!

Very silly of him to assume even the demigods of this city are able to afford basic necessities lmfao. I'd like to see 19 more in action, you've gifted us a new more villain leaning character to make the place richer by making the characters of Void City poorer.

you got her really in character, and the art is amazing!

Nicely done, you two!!

Spartan: loved your colors and action here, impressive effort!

Charlinear: good job on one of your first comics here!

An interesting match up.

Let's see some awesome comics!