Right back atcha Goldie and thanks for all the comments and feedback! I want the world to know that I was actually planning on giving Ancelin a very similar form down the road and was tickled pink when Goldie showed me a preview of it and asked if it was okay. I'm excited to update Ancelin's character sheet and bio and hype image and everything! Can't wait to see what's next for Crikey!

Thank you so much to everyone who commented and thank you Rose for this battle! I adore your comic so much ✨

Loved the ending Goldie! Super interesting to see this new form of Ancelin!

You both got me to crawl out of the woodworks to vote and comment on this!

Goldie: Your art work is always so nice, it's just a shame to see the comic incomplete and Anceline out of character. Your action shots were really nice along with the reveal, I was just surprised to not see Ancelin portrayed as more muscular and fight ready.

Rose: I really enjoyed the use of multimedia, specially the animation with the cracking.

Lots of good action shots that could have been pushed even further with some panel breaks. Loved seeing a fully colored comic out! Nice and vibrant!

Hahah that poor robo-Ancelin XD

That ending was surprising and totally unpredictable!! The design of Ancelin’s new form is gorgeous!

I was not expecting that. That was a beautiful transformation!

so she was inside there the whole time.

Goldie: That twist at the end got me so good, it's a shame you couldn't finish everything up but it was a really enjoyable comic!!

Rose: The animations floored me I was not expecting it, but I know you love to play with those sorts of themes. I think it was really successful! I also appreciate how there were portions of this comic that only Crikey could do, despite it mostly not involving Ancelin's opponent you still found a way to make Crikey contribute in a way that can't be easily replaced by another character. Huge kudos!

Once again Goldie you delivered a great comic, though its a bit unfinished in one or two panels, you still made it to the end and that in itself is truly the real treasure we make along the way, lol.

Seriously though this was a amazing way to end this void Olympics and I do enjoy the new look you designed for a certain character ( don't wanna give away too much spoilers in this comment incase someone is foolish to read this before reading the awesome comic first).

The ending was funny a little. The surprise twist was cool and the design is inspired.

The art was nice where it was finished. The story seems a little cut and paste to me because Ancelin feels so out of character. The interaction between Crikey and Swan was cute.

I am flabbergasted I am foaming at the mouth why do you do this to me-

Aweee thank you Rose! I'm so sorry you had some drama happening, I can defo understand; the wind was completely out of my sails too, but we made it! I look forward to reading your side!

Honestly this is going to be so fun

Good luck! Good luck! May the best weirdly supernatural lady win!