This character concept is creative and is a funny take on dead end signs which in this case is taken literally. The dead end sign being an angel of death is interesting, and you could put her in spooky places or unusual places that could lead to unexpected twists storywise.
In regards to more in-depth thoughts. Your comic is pretty simple and I think your colour choice is pleasing to my eyes. I want to articulate more of what I think about the broken up panel outlines because I'm kind of mentally stuck right now but I like the "electric" feeling it gives off.
It was a pretty easy to understand comic. I do think the text in the final panel could be a bit bigger because I had to zoom in to read it.
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This character concept is creative and is a funny take on dead end signs which in this case is taken literally. The dead end sign being an angel of death is interesting, and you could put her in spooky places or unusual places that could lead to unexpected twists storywise.
In regards to more in-depth thoughts. Your comic is pretty simple and I think your colour choice is pleasing to my eyes. I want to articulate more of what I think about the broken up panel outlines because I'm kind of mentally stuck right now but I like the "electric" feeling it gives off.
It was a pretty easy to understand comic. I do think the text in the final panel could be a bit bigger because I had to zoom in to read it.
Don't be afraid to copy more from the artists you love!
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