Petrichor: This came out absolutely incredible! Muro is such a little cutie - I audibly awwed when he tried to smile, lol. He's very quickly becoming one of my favorite characters in Void :]

Radji: Love how you've characterized their dynamic here! Her talking about her connection to Void to somebody deeply unused to it was very interesting to read.

I love how these two feel comics feel like they're connected! Radji must have some special superpower that lets him read his opponent like a book XD

I like how even though it’s sketches it is very expressive and dynamic. I imagine in color it would be amazing!

These two comics were super fun to read. I would've like to seen Radji's in a more completed state BUT It is readable and it is a great story overall. While Petrichor's on the other hand was a very nice interaction between the two and I really dig Muro's smile. Can't wait to see more of these two in the future!

It's a shame you couldn't finish this comic! From the sketches, I can see a lot of great composition and camera work. I couldn't quite make out all of the dialogue, but I think I got the jist and it's a very cute comic 🩷 I love that ending! I think it takes that kind of person to make a life in Void City/Voidlands 😂

Man, having a calmer perspective from these two is quite nice, I hope Muro comes to appreciate these new concepts XD

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Awesome art Radji! Would love to see this one finished!

Despite the unfinished visuals, I still think everything read pretty well. At least I didn't have any issues with it. What I really like about this comic, writing wise, is the exploration of what it means to be a citizen of the void after the events of 2022. It's definitely a topic I've been wanting to explore and that I definitely hope to see more of in the future as the voidlands setting gets further fleshed out

Sorry you couldn’t finish, but what you do have looks good, though I couldn’t read a small handful of words

Most of my recent battles feel like follow ups of my opponent's side nowadays, it's funny it still keep happening XD

Ah, too bad you couldn’t finish the comic in time…

I really hope you do finish it, the scenes look so good! And I loved their dynamic here too.

Honestly, it kinda feels like your comic could be a follow-up to mine, like they already know each other and team up now and then.

Can’t wait to see the finished version!

I loved the lettering in the first panel!

And while the dialogue is still there and most of the actions and body languages are clear, I end up getting a little lost every now and then. I hope you get to finish this soon 'cause it looks super fun!

The dynamic between these two is really neat and I enjoy how they are getting along

Smiley's love for Void is very sweet and wholesome

I hope you can get the inking on this done because I'd love to see what you had in mind!

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