Thank you very much, everyone. I try my luck again in another battle, let us seed if i can do better writing. I admit it is always so hard to write fir this wee robutt oc i have, but you know as the say, gotta get out of your comfort zone to improve! Haha

Wow that comic was silly and charming in all the ways only you know how to do 🩷 My favorite line was "wow he's really reading my algorithm" lmaooo and the hypnotic booty hell yes! I do have to say I think the story felt somewhat rambling and a bit anticlimactic, but I also loved Meredith just deciding he was done listening to the story 😂 So I'm not sure what advice I have tbh. I had fun, I like what you're doing with panel layouts and such, and I wanna see more!