Tbh I think my favorite part of this comic was the Lore Implications of Armas going back centuries. It made the whole Arma tradition feel... well, like a tradition! Almost folkloric. My second favorite part was the All Of It XD really excited to see where you go with him next!!

I LOVE MURO!!! The concept behind this is great, I loved the goofs and gags (the sign made me chuckle and the Family Guy death pose was 😩👌). I also love all the references to the last Arma and the Voidlands (and maybe an upcoming Arma???????) Also I'm honored to see the Technodome and Queen Ancelin referenced ☺️ Can't wait to see more from Muro!!!

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Thank you all for the kind comments! I’m glad Muro made a good first impression! A special thanks to Py for such a constructive critique! I hadn’t noticed that the text was so close to the edges of some speech bubbles, and I admit I left the sound effects for the last minute, so I didn’t put as much effort into them. But I’ll try to do better in the future. And yes, I absolutely love the world-building that the entire community has built together over all these years through tournaments and Armageddons, and I wanted that love and admiration to come through in this comic!

Petriiii this is so cool....Muro is such a fantastic character—big, sturdy, and loyal, but with such a sweet heart. His confusion is so endearing, and I love how he immediately jumps back into helping, even with the mistaken identity. The setup is so strong, and I can’t wait to see where his journey takes him! Also, the panel flow and storytelling are chef’s kiss—all that hard work and experience really shines through. Super excited for more!! (⁠ ⁠◜⁠‿⁠◝⁠ ⁠)⁠♡

Muro is way too precious Petri, I love him! I can’t wait to see more of him, this comic is so solid it feels like it’s already part of a series!

I love this so much! The writing, the pacing, and the feels for this golem, I was drawn in by it all! I can't wait to see what else happens with Muro, keep up the great work!

This character culminates so much of not just what you've learned over the years but what you've absorbed and enjoyed of the entervoid community as a whole, it really is a love letter to this place and its people and I love seeing the passion on the panels Character art I think you have nailed, composition and pacing are on point and you're getting better and better with colors. I think the next thing I want to see you really work on now is word ballooning and onomatopoeia's (the sound effects in comics). I think you're nearly there with balloons, just need to pay a bit more attention to how close letters get to the edge of balloons (if you're more conscious of this, in time it becomes a sixth sense to just know how well to place the letters within balloons). With onomatopoeias I recommend looking back at some of the visually tighter comics we have around here (Radji especially comes to mind as someone who really knows SFX lettering), really look at and digest how they're building and breaking down their SFX, and in your next comics the next time you've got one to make think about how you can work the SFX beyond the brush stroke selection so that it's as much as part of the artistic composition as it is giving audible information excited to see what comes next

INCREDIBLY charming character, and wonderful storytelling!! Another banger from you Petch, I adore him!!

Ohh yeh, this is good stuff! Lovely story and art Petri.

Was super hyped the first time you showed him to me, and even more so now that he's finally unleashed on the world! Can't wait to see what type of stories you *construct* with this BIG BOI. Amazing stuff as always, Petri!

MURO!!! YAS BRICKMAN WE ADORE YOU!!! GIVE US BRICK!!!🧱🧱🧱

Wonderfully polished art, charming charming characters with unique designs and FUNNY writing. aka a Classic Petri comic <3

I like it. A lot.

whoa this is really well-plotted! i really like how clearly and punchily all the story beats flow

The lad is here! Wahooo!

Exceptional work!!!!

This was such a good comic! I love the shift in styles for some of the flashback sequence and the rest of the comic, and that Muro physically gets larger with them eating materials! The pacing and colors were fantastic, this was such a fun read, and Muro is such a fun concept too!

This was fantastic! I love the memey pose when the overlord is struck down by the heroes mighty arrow. The story telling in this is perfect with just the imagery you have inm the panels. Love the back story for these golems! The comedy in this is GOLD!