This was quite the ambitious comic for you and I can see a lot of time and effort was put into this entry and I want to let you know that I did enjoy reading and see Dekkard do well with what they do which is the shooting event. Shooting as quite entertaining to observe and I feel that you were able to encapsulate that as well as add in your own brand of humor. Hopefully we see more of Dekkard in the near future

The Void Olympics being dubious enough to give a child a gun is really funny to me. I think scroll style is working for you but remember to add a little more detail and backgrounds.

Good job coloring and shading everything! I felt a little disappointed at the lack of drama in this comic though; it was a very straightforward story where the competition felt completely one sided and I didn't really feel like I was rooting for anyone. I thought the arrow was maybe going to hit someone, which was an interesting moment, but I think the joke ended up being more that the arrow didn't go far? I'm not sure. I think in future comics you could benefit from spending a bit more time thinking about both characters' motivations and tell a story about how those motivations conflict or combine to tell an interesting story. I want to see more focus on characters who are struggling to achieve their goals, and how they overcome their struggles. OP characters who always win can still be fun too, but you usually want to either focus on the struggles of their opponents (make the OP character a roadblock rather than the protagonist of the comic) or go a more comedic route where the interest comes more from jokes and gags rather than who wins in a competition. Anyways, I think your character is fun and I'm looking forward to seeing what you do next!

Hey, congrats on getting this whole thing colored!! I can see a definite improvement in your art already. And one thing I will absolutely commend you on is that you're unafraid to tackle difficult angles and poses; drawing characters drawing a bow is no easy feat, nor is drawing characters looking upwards. Pushing yourself to draw these difficult subjects will only lead to improvement! One small thing that I think would help your art immensely would be to try cleaning up your lineart a bit; there's a lot of instances where lines go past where they should (biggest example of this is on Dekkard's cheeks, where the underlying lines for his cheeks are still visible cutting through where his fluff sticks out). You don't have to clean the lines up perfectly--just focusing on the more noticeable instances will do wonders on making your art seem a bit more polished!

I think since guns are a fav subject of yours to draw you should make it a continuous soft goal to keep actively drawing them in your comics and illustrations. Sirloins proportions don't think early adolescent girls, so that's also something to keep in mind in the future.