@Itiz, the gimmick of multiple speech bubbles was really more of a one and done establishing concept. I feel hesitant to act on your suggestion because I don't think I'm skilled or clever enough yet to not make it look busy. Although if I got really lazy it could be a cheap way to wriggle out of doing my sparse use of backgrounds haha. Which this comic was a partial purpose for, to expand my comfort at drawing them.

Yeah Snowy, while I do use a ruler often enough, I don't recall when exactly I developed the bad habit of free handing stuff these days. Likely out of desperation on a tight deadline. I keep rationalising it as building discipline in confident mark making when it's the inverse, so I gotta wrestle it out of myself.

I would recommend using a ruler or something for your panels because it's a little distracting, but this was a silly story and fun to read! Nice work!

I love how many shoes Sanguine has😂🌸❤️ And I loved page 2 and 3❤️❤️❤️❤️ The bathroom looked great!!!🥰

I liked the establishing shot of the bathroom. And I like the idea of the 15 voices. Maybe a better way to go about it that could also enhance it visually is only putting one of the sentences in a bubble, and then just writing whatever it is they're saying in a more abstract fashion all over the panel. So it's sort of shows it "echoing" in the background. Just an idea!

This one took me a while and I began it in late 2024. I needed asap to consolidate a few stray ideas and to articulate some possible aesthetic decisions about some of my demon designs. This hypothetical demon Sanguine is strictly a being of pure nightmares and I don't consider him a canonical result of further corruption of Sanguine character/morality.