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Re:BIRTH
Just a quick BB that I wanted to create. Thank you for reading.
Open to any comments or critiques
This comic has been rated suitable for all ages by its creator(s)
Uploaded February 16, 2025
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Marcelo Rockman
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13d ago
Love your colors, inks dialogue, but what I love the most about your work is the fluidity of each panel connection, so easy and pleasant to follow each story beat. And for me that's the most important thing in a comic.

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Minteh
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1 month ago
literal chills when Dairyu started to 'vanish' on page 4, it was such a cool visual scene! What a neat combination of past present and future for her and Yamato; we got the lore, a visual update for the present, and a promise for future badassery! Especially loved your colours as so many have already said. You also have such a fun and unique way of tapering and organizing your panels to help direct the eye where you want, without making it feel like that empty space is 'wasted' space. It still feels fully utilized!

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Snowy
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1 month ago
Thank you for the additional comments! I've worked hard to get better at colors since I feel like that was my weakest point of comic making when I first started making them for VOID, so I'm so happy that people like the colors! I'm also glad that the exposition didn't turn people off, I know that it can sometimes be disinteresting or boring to people. I find there to be great importance in the 'exposition dumps' regarding lore though, since during battles it's hard to make that occur naturally in conversation and storytelling if it's not already about that. Anyway, I appreciate the comments so much, thank you everyone who's read this comic! ❤️

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Petrichor
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1 month ago
That might be the most beautiful comic you've ever posted here! It's amazing how much you've improved and developed such a unique coloring style over the years. Also, I Love Dairyu's new look!

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Durianknuckle
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1 month ago
Snowy, what can I say… Yamato, Yamato, Dairyu…🥺 Their bond is cute to see!🥰 And your comic’s colors, WAOUW🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩 it’s so clean, fresh, stylish, wonderful, on point and chef’s kiss!!! 😘

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ItizJR
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1 month ago
A couple of things stood out to me in this: 1) I really liked the color scheme you picked for this. You seem to be trending towards blues/purples and I think it works very nicely and contrasts well whenever a warmer color is introduced. 2) Although I'm not a fan of long exposition type storytelling, this felt different. More so like a storybook where the imagery blends with the words more so than I feel comics usually do by "separating" words with bubbles. Which I've started to take a liking to more and more. So it felt like the whole page was the canvas that demanded to be looked at as a whole instead of just each panel. 3) I liked the attention to detail with things like the rainbow-like patterns on borders in a lot of the pages and the flowers on the edge of the word balloons. 4) Your use of panels was really great. Really did a good job of leading the eye and pacing. So all in all, I see good stuff that makes the artist in me happy!

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Dekkard
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1 month ago
I really liked the colors and values in this, especially the rays of light on page 1.

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wilsoninc
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1 month ago
So bloody good! My favourite panel is the opening one, it just speaks to me.

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ElectricCleric
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1 month ago
A classic snowy amazing comic. The colors and art are beautiful and really give life to the story you're telling. This little tale is short and sweet and gives a beautiful taste of the world Dairyu and Yamato live in. Good work as always Snowy!

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Snowy
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1 month ago
Thank you everyone, for your kind comments so far! I'm happy that people like the comic, it means a lot to me! 🤍

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plaskit!
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1 month ago
whoa, that page 5 is absolutely stunning- i love the color palettes through the entire piece!

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Flytee
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1 month ago
as always beautiful work, I love the rich, vibrant colours, Dairyu's new form is also great. I'm so excited for this new era!

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Fluffsamasprime
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1 month ago
Your comic is gorgeous! From the story to the artwork!!! I love getting more info on Dairyu's pantheon!!

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Bobert
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1 month ago
This was definitely a visual marvel to ogle!