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An apocalypse setting is always a fun time. The message of magic wasn’t too clear, a good way to show it is have that magic be in the background in subtle ways. For example having the following panels surrounded by a green magic border. Also for a pitch the most important thing to highlight is the character and ending on just him doesn’t give the reader much to work with. Also make sure to use lots of references for poses and settings and compositions.

It's a nice concept but I feel we didn't fully explored enough of it for this pitch, perhaps if the first and last pages weren't full pages and more large splash panels with some additional story panels we could flush out the idea better. In the end any comic complete is a good comic in my eyes, and i commend you in finishing another comic, I think you're full of interesting ideas Dekkard, I want to see more stories that your mind has to explore, keep up the good work.

The green lights in the narrator's hand was supposed to be magic. I see now how it could be confused for fireflies or something else. I thought about putting something on the last page to show a source of magic but settled on a full body portrait of the narrator.

I'm not sure how literal the use of the term "magic" is supposed to be here, but you don't really see a lot of magic in post apocalyptic settings. At least now how it's implied here. That in itself catches my interest, but I think you gotta lean into it, because the big thing that might help this setting stand out is relegated to a single line of dialogue and the things that are shown, the sickness and faction wars, already permeate the post apocalyptic genre. If there are some remnants of magic here, I would have liked to see it.

I'm pretty interested I would say! Only critique would be to encourage you to use more references for weapons and the human bones.