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Basic fantasy stuff [Raltz style :P]
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Uploaded February 05, 2025

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TechnoAlchemist
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1 month ago

Honestly, what a fun idea for an artist battle! Everybody's entries were an absolute treat to see.

SirJellyRaptor: Honestly, your art style is always such a treat for me to look at so I might be a bit biased here, but your entry was stellar! The colors and linework really stood out to me. The tone and hints of worldbuilding were exciting, too - I could totally picture myself reading or watching it regularly if it was a show or a movie!

TRM: A funny and cute little comic! I've always been such a sucker for evil little guys in happy and healthy relationships, lol. I could easily imagine this as a sort of comic strip series, following the couple.

ItizJR: YOOOO this looks incredible! Every page of this is absolutely OOZING with style - the way that you make each panel pop out in my memory is an absolute marvel.

Mixiemon: I'll be honest, your entry was so fun and silly to me that it'll probably be the entry that I'll think the most about over the next few months, lol. The character designs are so crazy and cool and every bit of the comic is dripping with personality that I can't help but love it!

Cab: This was such a silly and campy pitch that I can't help but smile reading it :] My only experience with Duck Tales is via the reboot, but this still perfectly falls in line with its tone. Maybe I'm just a sucker to comics/homages to past versions of the artist, lol.

DoeFr: GOD, what a somber (yet absolutely stellar) comic. This is the one that I honestly want to know more about the most. Something that I've appreciated in your characters for a while now is how you'd occasionally branch out to representing other cultures and different time periods. The paneling in page 3 also stood out to me the most here - overall, phenomenal work!

Raltz: A short and silly little comic! The TOS bit at the last page honestly got a chuckle out of me. Would love to see every detail of their argument, lol.

Dekkard: An interesting little introduction! The first line and the description makes me wonder if the main character himself is the reason why the whole world is in the throes of an apocalypse, or if it caused something else.

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Durianknuckle's avatar
Durianknuckle
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11 months ago
I loved everyone’s comics. No words. PERFECTION🤩🤩🤩🤩
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Cab's avatar
Cab
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1 year ago
I love that idea of playing with Anime fantasy tropes, I found this comic very fun and entertaining, it might also be cuz I spent last weekend watching a lot of fantasy/ isekai Animes and I found this extra enjoyable because of that, Good work Raltz.

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SirJellyRaptor
Inker
1 year ago
These two have a good dynamic. Even for a Short and Sweet, this is a rapid fire comic, but even so I feel like I understand these characters perfectly. I wonder how this would keep up in a longer form comic, but here and now this is really working for me. Excellent pitch

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Bobert
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1 year ago
It was pretty funny. Your strongest comic in terms of polish!