I loved everyone’s comics. No words. PERFECTION🤩🤩🤩🤩

I like how you did the shadows in the caverns. really interesting way to show the darkness.

First I wanna commend you for this comic, you have truly come a long way from your first comic posted here years ago, you have shown true growth as a comic artist. Having said that, I feel this comic was a bit rushed at times with some panels that didn't flow too well, I was a bit confused why the ghost in the top panels of page two just issued a warning and then floated away, I get it that by the end it was playing with this party but visually it didn't quite connect as it should've. But making comics are all about trials and errors and always attempting new things and not being afraid to tell stories, something I always find you aren't afraid to do, keep on exploring the depths of your creative mines (minds), don't let anyone ever discourage you, comics are an freedom of expression and one you can always control, make more comics and have fun while doing it, keep on keeping on.

This is a touch darker than your usual. It's interesting to see you go this direction, and that line "fun to play with fun to break" is implemented VERY well, but I feel like the tone is somewhat counteracted by the little light sprite on the final page floating in and going "oh time for our date teehee" in a rather grisly scene. It feels like you need to decide if you wanna take this darker approach more seriously or if you do wanna go the other way and have a sillier cheerier tone despite the fact that terrible things are happening. As far as pitching a webcomic, I'm on the fence about it. It's not a bad comic but I'm not quite sure what the plot is, here. And immediately killing off 2/3rds of your cast is definitely a choice. Basically what I'm saying is as a standalone comic it functions just fine, but as an introduction to a larger story I don't think it gives us much

Dark fantasy is the spice of life! Or death....