Item: Dark Dark Dungeon
Rating: 2.96
Author: TRM_that guy that is cool

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Dark Dark Dungeon

by TRM_that guy that is cool

not my usual brite cheery stuff.

#dark gore fight deth

Open to any comments or critiques

This comic has been rated suitable for teens and up by its creator(s)

Uploaded February 05, 2025

In Battle

Short and Sweet: Webcomic Pitch

Artist Match

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Comments (6)

TechnoAlchemist

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4 months ago

Honestly, what a fun idea for an artist battle! Everybody's entries were an absolute treat to see.

SirJellyRaptor: Honestly, your art style is always such a treat for me to look at so I might be a bit biased here, but your entry was stellar! The colors and linework really stood out to me. The tone and hints of worldbuilding were exciting, too - I could totally picture myself reading or watching it regularly if it was a show or a movie!

TRM: A funny and cute little comic! I've always been such a sucker for evil little guys in happy and healthy relationships, lol. I could easily imagine this as a sort of comic strip series, following the couple.

ItizJR: YOOOO this looks incredible! Every page of this is absolutely OOZING with style - the way that you make each panel pop out in my memory is an absolute marvel.

Mixiemon: I'll be honest, your entry was so fun and silly to me that it'll probably be the entry that I'll think the most about over the next few months, lol. The character designs are so crazy and cool and every bit of the comic is dripping with personality that I can't help but love it!

Cab: This was such a silly and campy pitch that I can't help but smile reading it :] My only experience with Duck Tales is via the reboot, but this still perfectly falls in line with its tone. Maybe I'm just a sucker to comics/homages to past versions of the artist, lol.

DoeFr: GOD, what a somber (yet absolutely stellar) comic. This is the one that I honestly want to know more about the most. Something that I've appreciated in your characters for a while now is how you'd occasionally branch out to representing other cultures and different time periods. The paneling in page 3 also stood out to me the most here - overall, phenomenal work!

Raltz: A short and silly little comic! The TOS bit at the last page honestly got a chuckle out of me. Would love to see every detail of their argument, lol.

Dekkard: An interesting little introduction! The first line and the description makes me wonder if the main character himself is the reason why the whole world is in the throes of an apocalypse, or if it caused something else.

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Durianknuckle

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1 year ago

I loved everyone’s comics. No words. PERFECTION🤩🤩🤩🤩

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Mixiemon

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1 year ago

I like how you did the shadows in the caverns. really interesting way to show the darkness.

Cab

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1 year ago

First I wanna commend you for this comic, you have truly come a long way from your first comic posted here years ago, you have shown true growth as a comic artist. Having said that, I feel this comic was a bit rushed at times with some panels that didn't flow too well, I was a bit confused why the ghost in the top panels of page two just issued a warning and then floated away, I get it that by the end it was playing with this party but visually it didn't quite connect as it should've. But making comics are all about trials and errors and always attempting new things and not being afraid to tell stories, something I always find you aren't afraid to do, keep on exploring the depths of your creative mines (minds), don't let anyone ever discourage you, comics are an freedom of expression and one you can always control, make more comics and have fun while doing it, keep on keeping on.

SirJellyRaptor

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Inker

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1 year ago

This is a touch darker than your usual. It's interesting to see you go this direction, and that line "fun to play with fun to break" is implemented VERY well, but I feel like the tone is somewhat counteracted by the little light sprite on the final page floating in and going "oh time for our date teehee" in a rather grisly scene. It feels like you need to decide if you wanna take this darker approach more seriously or if you do wanna go the other way and have a sillier cheerier tone despite the fact that terrible things are happening. As far as pitching a webcomic, I'm on the fence about it. It's not a bad comic but I'm not quite sure what the plot is, here. And immediately killing off 2/3rds of your cast is definitely a choice. Basically what I'm saying is as a standalone comic it functions just fine, but as an introduction to a larger story I don't think it gives us much

Bobert

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1 year ago

Dark fantasy is the spice of life! Or death....