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CHAPTER 4 & EPILOGUE
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Uploaded January 09, 2025
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snager
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9 months ago
That was beautiful, dr. Bird! thanks for dropping it early on us, like we're your patreons. I'm sorry you had to cut some scenes, but even though the time begins to skip really heavily after the heavy duty incident that made me wanna cry, it still felt natural. I hope you have plans to start another comic! this was such a nice union of meta story telling tropes and high magic system sci fi. I would not mind staying in this world longer, but equally I'm interested in what yalls imagination can dredge up. also the bit about trying to get comics its own department had me laughing A+++ I hope you get a department! I appreciate getting to know what happened to all the little side characters. I wanted Paasil and Sil to wind up together, but it is very mature to show us how being fulfilled in our our goals is more important than just settling for your crush. XD makes me feel better for being single forever loooooooool

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Fred
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10 months ago
we ended up having to cut down the second half of the comic by a lot, so it's not as smooth as we'd wished... but at least like this it's complete :3

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Pizza Man
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10 months ago
The ending felt a bit sudden but I liked the story overall!

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Bobert
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10 months ago
And now the story ended, wow.