Hey looks interesting! and the story is clear to read too. I feel like your imagination and concept are pretty solid but you cant pull it off yet. Looking forward to when your skill catches up :D

A bounty hunters type character huh? These used to be all over this site it seems but cool to see a new one! I know it sucks, and nobody likes to do them, but at least trying to add a bit of background details would do wonders. Congrats on finally making the plunge!

More characters are joining the fray!