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ReMatch: Taming the Dog
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ItizJR
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1 month ago
I guess I'll start off with saying congrats on actually finishing the comic! I see attempts at including a nice variety of angles so good job on that. A lot of people have mentioned the anatomy and poses thing, but I'll pinpoint one thing to maybe help you focus as "anatomy" is a pretty big thing when looked at as a whole, but breaking it down into chunks helps. One of the things that jumps out at me is the faces. Most notably the eyes. They are simply too far apart and a lot of the time, can appear slightly cross-eyed. I'd try maybe working on just improving the eyes at first (It's also a thing I need to work on!). Story wise, it feels a bit off that Paavo would just trust Jessie right away after meeting her 10 years ago where she apparently beat him up. It feels rather forced so that you could move the story forward. But the general idea of the story was fine. Just keep working at it!

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Fluffsamasprime
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1 month ago
I'm gonna give you some kuddos! It's really nice to see you finish a comic! Even without colors the greyscale still comes through. anatomy and poses could use some work, but the comic did get me to smille. Also it's nice to see you let the characters do a bit of interaction that isn't just fighting, even if it ends in them going to crack some skulls off screen. Keep up the good work!

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Snowy
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1 month ago
Nice work on completing a comic, energy! I think you could use some more practice with anatomy and posing. I am glad that you made a comic where the two characters didn't get into a fight. I hope you keep trying to get better at making comics.

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Bobert
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1 month ago
Energy I reckon you could stand to gradually add more references to your artistic process. Not all at once but enough where the challenge feels fun to you. And then but by bit increase the pressure.