I've been working on this on and off for a couple of months now! It originally came into being because Snowy once said she wanted a more rivalry-like dynamic on Void for Dairyu and I sad BET ....and didn't properly finish until now SORRY XD Enjoy!
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Fluffsamasprime's avatar
1 month ago
Very nice! It's always nice seeing characters backgrounds with each other. Hopefully we'll see more in the future as well!

Petrichor's avatar
1 month ago
I LOVED all the lore about these three's past, and the plot twist at the end XD. Some of these panels looked so cool, especially the one where they're reviving Margea. I also liked the change in mood with the heavier graytones during the flashback. Hopefully, Margea appears more often; she's such an interesting character and seems to be the only one who can calm those two down lmao.

ItizJR's avatar
1 month ago
Gotta admit that on my first read, the initial pages kind of confused me, but upon second read, it was much more enjoyable and I could "get" the story and humor much more. I think what confused me on the first read was that I didn't really know who was who. as well as who was talking. The little symbols on the word balloons didn't help me much since I didn't know who they symbolized. But that's just me not really knowing the history of the characters much I guess. I also thought the long haired girl was Dairyu just because that's her design. So I was left wondering who the short haired girl was. Even though in my head I was thinking that it SHOULD be Dairyu since it only makes sense for her to be with Richter. But anyway. I like that you have a distinct style of writing that's very entertaining. It makes it so that I don't care as much that you don't have the best art. That being said though, it's also not bad art by any means! Art is a never ending journey of improvement so I have no doubt you'll keep on getting better and better with time. This was a very ambitious story and I liked where you went with it. This could definitely be developed way further and I'd be all for it!

Snowy's avatar
1 month ago
Definitely a lot more childish than Dairyu would act, but I can appreciate the humor. Interesting story, thanks for featuring Dairyu!