I'll add more thoughts later when I have more time but I had to say that I loved everyone's entries and their portrayals of the robots!

I don't have too much to add that hasn't already been said, other than the fact that you do a really good job of setting up an unsettling mood/atmosphere in your comics! Which imo is especially impressive in this particular comic because nothing outright sinister happens, and yet everything Harrison does comes off as vaguely threatening and sinister. Also I fuckin loved Harrison just climbing out a goddamn window XDD

The drama and mystery here is soo much fun, this comic has such a strong mood to it that I absolutely adore. I really like how you portrayed Songbird’s eyes glitching out, and that full page spread on pg 10 is super cool and has so much energy to it! I’d love to learn more about Harrison’s motivations here. Great stuff!

I had a lot of fun reading all these comic! Loved all the portrayals of Songbird. I feel like Pizzaman got him the closest. It had me laughing pretty good. I loved all these though. Everyone went very hard on heavy weight!

Snowy - I loved your plot and the art was superb, liked a lot Dairyu here, also thanks for the cameo! Fluff - I loved your color palette and character expressions, but the thing I most loved are the references to Morshuu HAHAHAH YOU WANT IT!? IT'S YOURS MY FRIEND Keito - Really good sketches! Story was nice. Pizza - I will always love how free your style is. Selevan - Nice story and monochrome style!

Sorry these aren’t too in depth but here you go; Pizzaman: Loved the storytime storyline, and good job on the long scroll format! The only thing I wanna recommend is using the ellipse/circle tool for text bubbles, the odd shapes were throwing me off a bit Selevan: Excellent work on the character depictions and action, good sir! But I agree with Jelly in that there’s things left unanswered but the end of the comic. Maybe that’ll be in another comic you got planned but as a stand alone it can confuse peeps. Keep up the good work tho Jelly: Despite the fact these are sketches, they work so well as lines I had no trouble following along! Your panel work is stellar and your story amazed me, wonderful job! Fluff: I was laughing through this entire read, your comedy is always amazing! I loved your portrayal of everyone and your minimal palette~ Snowy: This has gotta be one of your most outstanding comics yet! Everything was so on-point, and I’m happy to see a different side to her than normal! Super excited to see more!

I really like the idea of the train which reminded me of the movie Bullet Train (which I LOVE!), but as Raptor mentioned, it's unfortunate that we don't find out more about the purpose of the train and Harrison is trying to stop it in the first place. At first read, I was surprised that it was ending and had a thought that maybe you just didn't have time to finish the entire vision before deadline. You did have some neat ideas in here. I especially liked the interaction with Songbird. Only thing is that each characters role just didn't seem to actually matter to the overall plot: stop the train. This more or less felt like it would be the beginning of the story, with the ending being the inciting incident that actually starts act 2. Which I would be totally down for! Art wise, I liked a lot of your shots. There was a lot of variety in the types of shots (which is something I'm trying to work on as well!). Only thing I would say would bump up the overall quality art wise would be the backgrounds. Which I get, is usually the less exciting stuff that probably gets pushed to the very last minute. But just adding some details/textures onto the train would have worked wonders I feel. And nice try on the effect on page 9. Feel like I know what you were going for, but for some reason it just doesn't land as intended and just looks like she's going slow af. Maybe adding some speed lines or even taking a trick from animation and smearing the form would have communicated the speed better? I do like Harrison as a character though, he's right up my alley! Good job overall!

The visuals here are very well executed, which is to be expected from you, and I like the depictions of all the characters, I think ypu got their personalities down real well! But I do take issue with the fact that there's no real resolution for any of the threads going on here. You present a lot of questions but no real answers, and I would LOVE to know the answers here. It all keeps coming back to the core question of what IS Harrison doing here? We know he's on a job, but never get any hint as to what he's actually trying to accomplish. Which is great for building up anticipation and expectation, his coyness about his reall intentions makes the reader want to know whats really going on more and more, but then we get to the end and it seems to cut off just before he actually does what he came to do, so we're just left wondering.

I liked the action shots that you had in this comic! The story was an interesting one and makes me wonder what Harrison needed to do at the end of his journey down the train. Nice work on the gray scales in this!

This was a cool comic and your grey scales were topnotch yo.

Incredible effort from everyone! I've had little time to indulge in comics and art lately, so I apologize if my comments on each of the entries are brief PIZZAMAN- The stylization of some characters specifically is very fun and appealing. I liked the whole aspect of everyone telling their own story. The dynamic between characters was hilarious SELEVAN- The vougue-like cover already had me invested in what was gonna happen with Harrison. I got really excited when Harrison climbed on the train's roof to avoid crossing that door. Such a cool Western Spaghetti easter egg. I always like seeing characters be polite to others, even if they get in the way of their goal SIRJELLYRAPTOR- I'm a big fan of your art style, and regardless of your entry being considered sketches; the creativity with how you play with the panels and the line weight makes it feel as if it's inks instead. I'm always impressed with your work. Specially it (seemingly) being made with a ballpoint pen. Amazing work at dialogue, too FLUFFS - Holy shit your entry put a big ol' smile on my face lmao! The Zelda CD-i reference in the begining grabbed my attention right away. And then I read what was going on and got doubly excited! I am incredibly flattered and thankful for the cameo and references to my idiot himbo. Songbird's constant hatred for Swan will never cease to be hilarious and I love him for it. The scene with Songbird and Harrison trying to fool Dairyu was so endearing and funny SNOWY - The quality on your entry is absolutely stunning. Your inks seem to be getting even better with each comic I see from you. I really digged the expressions and body language in this! And seeing Dairyu starting to get overzealous over her family is both exciting and terrifying. These 'new' sides from her are very intriguing but I also worry about my fave air goddess- the words you ended the comic on would be very wholesome on another context. I really like how foreboding Dairyu's stories have been

GUAGH AGAIN APOLOGIES FOR THE INCOMPLETE CAKE BUT ITS SOMETHING OVER NOTHING IN A BAD SITUATION