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Little World
Mother's Day Comic
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ItizJR
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5d ago
Good Job on the baby expressions. Really feels like you capture the essence of how a young child behaves and how they will completely ignore the "babbling" of their mothers hah.

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Rivana
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9d ago
I've already screamed about this on social media several times and even in your DMs, but I can't stop now, lol. I absolutely love the hatching style you used here, and the blue tones really add to the contemplative atmosphere of this scene. Sable's cheeks are so incredibly cute—I just want to pinch them! AHHHH! I have to mention how much Pyras surprised me with this comic as I had no idea he was working on this until it was done. This was entirely his work, and I'm really impressed with how he wrote Raven as if she were his own character. Her guilt mirrors Miller's, which I believe is one of the reasons they connect so deeply. Raven's habit of pre-emptively apologizing to the people she cares about (whether verbally or just within her thoughts), fearing she might hurt them in the future, is central to why she's afraid of getting close to others. She carries this fear constantly, especially with those she loves the most. In this comic timeline, we see Raven taking the leap to love and be loved again, and embracing a new life of raising a family. It looks like she's making some real progress, lol. Additionally, her desire (or expectation?) for Sable to be better than her in every way resonates with her character. As Snowy pointed out, Raven can be overprotective to a fault, and this selfless desire to protect Sable, Miller, and everything she loves can be a double-edged sword. She would sacrifice everything—and probably everyone—for them. Pyras, thanks again for this sweet comic. I'll treasure it forever. It's a perfect companion to Miller's Father's Day comic from last year.
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Petrichor
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9d ago
Whoa another baby Sable comic! That was a nice surprise!! And such a wholesome comic too.
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Bobert
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10d ago
Ah another Sable as a baby comic but from a different perspective? Nice!
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Snowy
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10d ago
Really cute comic! Overprotective moms ftw, I'm looking forward to more comics about them.
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