Yo. This comic was off the rails. I like how you all pooled your strengths into this one. I hope you had fun with it. There's like 5 of you and one of me so I can't really spare any fully articulated critiques beyond some encouragement.
First off both sides did an amazing job, great work both of you. I was able to see some of your work behind the scenes and I will say y'all work good together, and major Kudos to Selevan for taking on multiple foes at once.
Ohm side - Your comic had great dynamic angles and great fight choreography easy to read and follow, so impress by the effort you had to show for it, great job.
Defenders side- You all did an amazing job, it was a fun, simple plot involving basketball that you all managed to showcase in all your characters unique ways, funny and entertaining it might be a large comic but it flows so nicely, I felt like I just started reading it when it came to an end, mark of a great tale it leave you wanting more. I hope to see a sequel of some sorts down the line, especially cuz you left us a good cliff hanger with Eva (will she release Ohm ???) , Thank you for sharing this fun collab and I can't wait to see what happens next.
This has been a fun read, and best of all I could tell that everybody was able to collaborate fairly seamlessly with each other to tell a cohesive story, which is a feat in itself. The Space Jam angle was great, and I love how you were able to let each of your characters shine in their own way. It's a great twist to the classic 5 vs 1 fistfight and I could tell you guys had fun with it! Good job to all involved!
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