I'm really glad you got to expand on Authur like this! You clearly have a lot of plans for him and I can't wait to see what you do!

Very nice! Excited to see more of Mercury!

Fantastic comic Ramen! I've been enjoying watching your comic-making skills develop, you've got a really strong art style and approach to character design that always make your works feel so unique! Archer and Kamari are already such a fun duo, It's nice to see a sibling duo pop up on Void, they're not that common. In terms of crits, if this was a battle I wouldn't have this one- but I do think for beyond battles you should either choose to fully colour or do no-colour alternatives, it's always a bit jarring having the visuals change up halfway through a story. I'm also not a fan of that blank page in the middle of the comic. Overall this was very solid and entertaining to read!

WOAH! Extended intro story! Nice! I love how you introduced Archer by showing his relationship with Kamari. They have a super cute sibling dynamic.(I also noticed the lil cameo of my guy in the city shots, thx <3!!) The way you immediately threw Archer into Void and so many of it's characters is commendable and I'm excited to see what Archer gets into in future stories!!

Hell yeah, keep expanding that roster!