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Intro Story
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Rikun
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11 months ago
I'm really glad you got to expand on Authur like this! You clearly have a lot of plans for him and I can't wait to see what you do!
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Fluffsamasprime
All-Rounder
11 months ago
Very nice! Excited to see more of Mercury!
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Flytee
All-Rounder
11 months ago
Fantastic comic Ramen! I've been enjoying watching your comic-making skills develop, you've got a really strong art style and approach to character design that always make your works feel so unique! Archer and Kamari are already such a fun duo, It's nice to see a sibling duo pop up on Void, they're not that common. In terms of crits, if this was a battle I wouldn't have this one- but I do think for beyond battles you should either choose to fully colour or do no-colour alternatives, it's always a bit jarring having the visuals change up halfway through a story. I'm also not a fan of that blank page in the middle of the comic. Overall this was very solid and entertaining to read!
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Juxta
All-Rounder
11 months ago
WOAH! Extended intro story! Nice! I love how you introduced Archer by showing his relationship with Kamari. They have a super cute sibling dynamic.(I also noticed the lil cameo of my guy in the city shots, thx <3!!) The way you immediately threw Archer into Void and so many of it's characters is commendable and I'm excited to see what Archer gets into in future stories!!
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Bobert
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11 months ago
Hell yeah, keep expanding that roster!
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