Fantastic comic Ramen! I've been enjoying watching your comic-making skills develop, you've got a really strong art style and approach to character design that always make your works feel so unique! Archer and Kamari are already such a fun duo, It's nice to see a sibling duo pop up on Void, they're not that common.
In terms of crits, if this was a battle I wouldn't have this one- but I do think for beyond battles you should either choose to fully colour or do no-colour alternatives, it's always a bit jarring having the visuals change up halfway through a story.
I'm also not a fan of that blank page in the middle of the comic.
Overall this was very solid and entertaining to read!
WOAH! Extended intro story! Nice! I love how you introduced Archer by showing his relationship with Kamari. They have a super cute sibling dynamic.(I also noticed the lil cameo of my guy in the city shots, thx <3!!) The way you immediately threw Archer into Void and so many of it's characters is commendable and I'm excited to see what Archer gets into in future stories!!
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