Fluff- very promising pencils! Shame it's unfinished, but it happens, better luck next time. Cab- a neat lil comic with a great punchy ending.

Fluff - even 1 sketchy page showed a lot of action! It left me wanting more! Cab- good comic overall, Celif design made me laugh

Fluff - This one page showed a lot of promise but I fully understand with life getting in the way and things just happening that can effect your comic making process. Hopefully things get better for ya and I hope to see more of Celif in the near future Cab - Oh a Jacob Gray comic and this one was a neat read.The interaction between Celif and Jacob was quite interesting and shows Jacob's naivety when it comes to the monsters of Void City and it was kinda cool seeing that Celif although going back to his old ways, inadvertently helping the bookstore. I hope to see more of Jacob Gray in the near future

Fluff - I really love the pencils you turned in, your poses and angles keep getting better and more dynamic. I really want to know what you had planned for this comic, with how much of a bang the first panel has! I hope this doesn't dishearten you too much from future battles, but take all the time you need! Cab - Interesting story, some of the quotes felt fitting and some felt like they were forced a bit. I can see why you wanted to try quotes out since they're at a book store! The angles you use for establishing shots are always very varied and detailed, which is nice! The only real issue I had was I do think you could have emphasized Celif's nose without changing the entire deisgn Fluff has for him, it was a little distracting for me the first read through (despite knowing it was a style choice).

as I told Fluff I extended Celif's nose to make it more beak like to go along with his Griffin form, it's a style choice.

Man. I really shit the bed on this one, guys