Prosaic and Radji - The Page size is what really threw me off and made it quite hard to read. I recommend using a 1000px wide margin for future comics. Comics can be a bit hard to grasp BUT you do show a lot of potential and grit. Hopefully we see more of Spawn Point in the near future! Energy and Desdemonical - Solid paneling and lines I can see here and the story is simple and short. It was a fine comic. Hopefully we see more of Akemi H. Iwai in the near future.

Prosaic - Panel use is very clever on some of these pages, and the sound effects look fun! Agreed about page size, exporting to 1000px or 1200px wide is always a good idea for readability. Energy - Super short, but I'm glad to see a finished comic from you! I hope you're able to do more comics in the future to this level of finished.

Prosaic and Radji- those pages need to be way smaller! but this is an interesting introduction to the character, i liked the big bold lines and the disjointed story! Energy and Des- quick and simple, i dont know if there were more pages planned but this is particularly clean looking, it would have been nice to have some simple backgrounds maybe!

Pro- It's always a good idea to preview the comics to make sure they're properly sized. That being said I really enjoyed the Bullets ricochet on page 9. The panels got a little wink-wonky, but it was really nice to see the experimentation with them. Energy- Only two pages but you got this completed and its consistent through out. Grayscale was a good choice in helping polish your comic up.

Energy and Des: I assume you guys had something going on to have the comic be truncated like that. It's cool that the two pages are polished and not incomplete since I know Energy is usually menaced by too many circumstances that detract from his focus, though I'd have loved to see more pages. Prosaic and Radji: Pros, the only real criticism that I can give in regards to what I found to be an egregious flaw was the page size, it felt a bit too unwieldy to read this comic but other wise it's a neat comic and I hope to see more from you in the future.