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Play Date
This was a fun adventure piece to establish a new antagonist that may reappear in the near future. This one was a fun one that I really enjoyed making, but due to unfortunate circumstances that reduced my schedule to work on this comic, I had to cut out lots of stuff. But I am still content with what I made and I really hope y'all like it as well! CHARACTER NOTE: Update to Zavan's head character model. Which is a pointed arch which is part of the brontosaurus that Zavan is supposed to be based off of. hopefully no more adjustments is needed
Open to any comments or critiques
This comic has been rated suitable for all ages by its creator(s)
Uploaded July 29, 2023
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Bobert
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2 years ago
Raltz: You're gently pushing the envelope on what you can do, so I can only say to keep doing what you're doing for now. Let's see what your 10th comic on the site looks one of these days. Platinum: You put a lot of your soul and elbow grease into this comic. There's not much I can say besides praise and general encouragements I don't think. Although I could suggest adding a bit of the DNA of the artists you love and adore into your work to make you a more powerfuler animal. But I'm telling this to literally everyone, even Raltz. Even myself via time portals and psychic scrutiny. Let's see you surpass this milestone.
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Gregly
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2 years ago
PlatinumArtist- cool story you have here, i like the drawing of the temple building in the sewer! the panel of the ropes being cinched hard on candace's wrists is brutal, you really feel it! Cute ending too- good work Raltz- short and sweet, sirloin really loves cheese! viro is so kind for coming to the rescue. keep up the good work!
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BoogidiBzdo
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2 years ago
These are nice stories. Platinumartist- You have put a lot of effort in your story and I enjoyed reading the richness of Viro’s lore. I liked the different character designs you have. Raltz- Very fun comic. Your art style is unique. I would like to see more of Sirloin! Great job both of you!
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RamenBean18
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2 years ago
Platnium: Pacing was beautiful, and A very fun comic! I was in intrigued of how you put this story together! The characters are adorable and fun! Loved it!!! Raltz: your style is cute and I loved the cheese joke at the end! Loved that you kept it short and sweet! You guys did awesome!! For me, drawing comics(staying committed to finishing is hard) so proud of y’all!! 💚💚💚
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