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A Word For You
Just a 3 hour comic
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This comic has been rated suitable for all ages by its creator(s)
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DesDemonical
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1 year ago
*Monologues to baby* Baby: 0.o Jokes aside this was very sweet. I loved the panelling and simple premise, and the whole exploration of the word 'miracle.' Very nicely done.
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Bobert
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1 year ago
It was a cute comic and I hope to work my way up to your level of skill when doing comic pages in a comparatively brief amount of hours.
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Petrichor
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1 year ago
This is such a sweet comic, you conveyed so much emotion in just two pages. Rivana said it all!
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Rivana
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1 year ago
It's no surprise that these two characters are very close to my heart so I apologize in advance for the gushing that is about to ensue lol. Even though this is a 3-hour comic, there is nothing that looks rushed about it. The writing is inspired and well thought out. The art is very polished. The hatching style that you used really added dimension to your crisp and clean lineart/inks. I always admired the confidence in the way you do lineart and I think this comic is a testament to how less is more. The character silhouettes and forms are very strong and clear, they stood on their own. The minimal background was not really a deterrent in this case, but supported the characters as they are the true focus of this short comic. Despite us co-writing a lot of stuff involving Miller and Sable, this still came to me as a pleasant surprise since the comic is so out of the blue and spontaneous. I love having a glimpse of this moment between Miller and Sable. It's very precious and heartwarming..but also bittersweet knowing what becomes of Sable's powers later on. Needless to say, I am heavily invested in these characters' stories and I am looking forward to more content about them in the future. I am amazed by your skill in crafting relatable characters amidst the backdrop of fantastical elements and thrilling adventures. Despite their lives being consumed (or will be consumed in Sable's case) by these otherworldly encounters and seemingly insurmountable challenges, you managed to bring forth a sense of connection and familiarity that resonates deeply with the reader. Well, for me in particular in this case. As a parent myself, I appreciate the profound lessons we learn from our children, just as they learn from us. Your comic beautifully captures this dynamic, portraying the wonderment and curiosity displayed by both father and daughter. Then we see this powerful and unconditional love between them, an unbreakable bond beautifully illustrated in that last panel.
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PyrasTerran
Writer
1 year ago
Ready to upload! Just a 3 hour comic I did out of the blue Happy Father's Day
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