Both of these were nice. MRPR: I like how you gave Foop so much focus in your comic and for something made in one week, a deadline that breaks even the best, this comic is looking fine and dandy. Firefly: I like the comedic twist at the end, shows how different Foop and Sour Salt are.

Mrpr: I think this was one of your best comics so far! The greyscale was nice and easy to read. You did some really nice action panels and gore. Not much story wise, but it was still fun mindless violence! Firefly: I was so surprised to see Foop cursing, but then I remembered they are the diov counterpart. I love them calling Sour a peasant and fighting over the ring pop thinking it was actual jewelry. Y'all did fantastic on these!

We got a couple short and sweets here, which is surprisingly fitting, given the characters. Or I guess ironic given the versions we're seeing here. Firfly: about halfway through I was thinking to myself "just let the dragon have the ring pop, man" so I got a good chuckle.at the ending. Simple.premise but it works. PR: this is a touch more grisly than I've come to expect from you, which is in no way a complaint. Foop works well in your style, my only con is I don't think we really needed Foops background exposition reiterated in this comic.

Firefly - Great job on the comic. I like the back and forth between the two characters and the twist is goofy. There are a few panels where I would have liked to see some diversity in angles or zoom out/in (specifically panel 2 and 3 on page 3) MrPr1993 - I like how dynamic this comic is, though I would have liked more of a punch to the ending. The blowing up and regrowing of Sour Salt's head is horrifying. I loved it.

Had fun reading these entries! Good work!

Firefly - Loved the reveal (poor Foop!), and how much of a gremlin you made him. The interaction was fun, nice work! MrPr - I think you missed out on having Foop tag team with Sour Sweet for future adventures, but alas! The dialogue seemed a little forced, but the fast paced action really suited the story well. I'm impressed with how much you got done in a week!

MRPR - It was a delight to battle you! I had a lot of fun with Sour Salt and I feel like our characters were a great fit! I can't help but to think how different both our battles would have been if it was their Void versions instead lol. I really loved the expressions you gave Foop and how they squeaked when Sour grabbed them. You were pretty spot on with their personality. I loved the panel of them as an actual dragon, it's very close to how I envision them! Anyway good game and good luck to you! No matter the results this was a lot of fun!

Firefly that was a delightful and very funny battle. LetFoopSayFuck2023. I loved the final page reveal, it made me laugh out loud. MRPR, yours had a lot of really fun dynamic action. I love the panel of sour salt grabbing foop hehe.