I just want to pop in and thank everyone who left a comment, it was very encouraging <3 cheers guys

This was nice, I'd love to see the version of the comic that you deem to be finalised given time, I appreciated the intrigue.

I like the mix of paint and harder outlines, like how you use them to make Blue look transparent and glowy. the texture lines drawn on things like the ferry seating are a nice touch, and the gradient on the sky in the ferry background are great, too. your environments really make me feel like these are real places I could go to, which is nice as I've never even seen a ferry before and i would never imagine what their docks look like. movies tend to skip over that part. your art may be old, but it's great to see how you work when you have no time limit! I had no problem with the scroll format, only really noticed it when she was having banter with the ferry captain. anyway, it's nice to see this is the level of craftsmanship your webcomic will have and I look forwards to it! great job, Flytee!

Oh Hell yes. I was looking forward to reading this since you began posting about it. Your art is looking stellar in these pages! And i'm glad you decided to share them with us even though they are scrapped pages. I know you'll come back with an even better format and art when you restart this story.

these scrapped pages were fun to read! I really like seeing how rae and blue interact, and you make their expressions so delightful! I also really love the colors and texture