Interesting characters, I like their dynamic! Always like seeing some super close and supportive buds. Cygnus' design calls to me, I love little goblin dudes lol.
For crit, I think the background on the first page could be more developed; I didn't realize Craig's in a bathtub (or a bathroom) until page 2. Maybe it's intentionally hazy at first since he's lost in his thoughts, but there's still some indication of the tub. For something like this, I think it would be best to either intentionally lean into the haziness of the background and make your intent super clear, or just make the tub a little more readable so we can see where he's sitting. The last page is really fun, I like how the shading is super different, it really gives it an impact. I'm interested in what these characters will get up to and I wanna see Craig's powers in action sometime! Looking forward to more!
I'm really interested to see where the story goes next! Craig and Cygnus have a nice dynamic going on, and they both have distinctive personalities that meld well together. The expressions and character designs are also top notch.
awww craig....i'm glad cygnus is there to support him and help pull him out of his self-loathing a little...excited to read more about these two! Also all these expressions are GRAND
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