These were both entertaining to read. Bobert it looks like you've been reading all the comments and taking them to heart. You cleaned up the comic really well. Made the words easy to read, and I can visually follow the story. Keep this up! You're headed in the right direction. Phb I like your use of the different tones. You drew the characters really cute in your style. Having fun making the comic is the most important part.

Haha bobert I still really enjoyed yours even without a lot of context, I felt the final page made me understand the basic idea well enough. I loved seeing Sanguine's outfits and deranged expression :) Maybe next time to make it more clear you could just have a page with a quick intro of each character or something establishing the setting a bit? Some context I think would have helped. halfbreed i really enjoyed the comedy of this! Sanguine throwing a tantrum and getting hit with a muffin is just perfection. Was a delight to read hehe

I very much enjoyed this comic <3 Got a good chuckle of Sanguine just killing demons and just eating the cake Kid baked. Kid ain't happy sharing but I guess payment is necessary.

This was good. Thank you.... Now I gotta collapse to the floor in exhaustion...