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War for Rayuba! Round 5:
This was my entry for the 5th round for W4R, I still really like it so I decided to share it here as well! It was a deathmatch, and my character is the big slab of meat with teeth, the Headless Hunter Enjoy! [the resizing made it a lil crispy I'M SORRY]
Open to any comments or critiques
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Uploaded July 17, 2022

Comments (6)

Juxta's avatar
Juxta
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4 years ago
Your line work is so dynamic and that SFX is so VISCERAL!!! Awesome battle comic Selevan, seemed like it was fun to create!!!
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Putrid
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4 years ago
Lovely inks and creatures! Page 5 was my favorite, the bottom panel was absolutely divine!
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4 years ago
I love how you draw creatures, and the action is really fun to look at! I think you could work a little bit more on speech bubbles, words either look crowded, or that they're floating in gaps of nothing, but this is a nice comic regardless! I'd love to see more!
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4 years ago
This was really interesting. I really love the cover you did for this. The trippy colors. The quality was a little bit all over the place, but you get get all these nice action shots through out, and the details on page 6. I think my favorite thing is the bears face on page 10. Such a haunted look
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4 years ago
Bobert: War For Roomba Harrison sure did have a neat gimmick to his immortality where his head needed to be together with his original body to function or else it'd turn into the screwed up monster thing you introduced in round 5. Maybe you should expand on the concept more now that you're not constrained by Murder 6 Milliard Fiends ruleset. Haha yeah I hope I will get more chances to do so!
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4 years ago
War For Roomba Harrison sure did have a neat gimmick to his immortality where his head needed to be together with his original body to function or else it'd turn into the screwed up monster thing you introduced in round 5. Maybe you should expand on the concept more now that you're not constrained by Murder 6 Milliard Fiends ruleset.
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