I want to thank everyone who took time to read, vote and even comment. It really means a lot and I hope you guys look forward towards more stories of both Viro and Leonore Phyre

Awesome job guys! Love seeing people taking on the newbies! Plat: Loved seeing you dip into different effects. Drakkon: Little rough, but I'm loving the potential you're bringing

Platinum: A nice display of Viro's wits, cerebral fighters need more space in this city. Liked the foreshadowing at the end. LordDrakon: Nice Lil shonen feeling fight, your influences are evident, in time when you find your style keeping that level of dynamism in your fight will do you great.

I'm just hoping to see more of either characters story unravel, so I want to see the outcome of this fight and what direction both Viro and Leo will go towards.

PLAT! Nice linework, and the effects are pretty good too! I like that Viro destroys her opponent in acid but i think the effect would have been better if when he realizes it isnt water you SHOWED his skin dissolving somewhat, a little melty gore, maybe some screams of pain. The action is... a TAD stiff. Theres no hit sparks or speed lines, the blows seem to lack impact. Good work on the landscaping though, I had a pretty good feel of their location. DRAK! Looks like you need to find your voice a bit, you lean a little hard on Toriyama style. Its okay to have influences in your art! But absorb some other influences as well, and some references. I look forward to seeing where you go with your style, you have a lot of flat lines and sharp angles that i think you could utilize for something really dynamic. Keep at it! I sense a lot of great potential in you!

Looking forward to this one guys! Put on a good show