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Jiames v. Maoumi
Better late than never!
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This comic has been rated suitable for all ages by its creator(s)
Uploaded March 25, 2022
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snager
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3 years ago
is true, dream weaver. IS very important to be late instead of not showing. U3U And this was a nice showing. I thought the idea of this sort of 'king of games' angle was interesting. I got a little lost trying to figure out why they're in a sumo ring together, but the concept is original.
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johannhawk
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3 years ago
Salt circle. but of course.
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Putrid
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3 years ago
I'm glad we got to see your side too! Really loved the way you use harsh shadows and halftone patterns! The lines of actions were pretty neat too, really digged that nod on how short the fight really was at the end
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maxes
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3 years ago
YOOOOO, cool comic. I loved the inking and hatching so much. Glad you uploaded this :)
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Fluffsamasprime
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3 years ago
I'm glad you were still able to upload your side! Awesome job!
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Dream Weaver
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3 years ago
Bobert: You did it, you got it out! It felt a little bit confusing to read in places like when Jiames wanted to surrender and in page 5 and 6, I didn't realise that Maoumi threw him up into the air and then he came back down in the last panel, I initially misread that as him being thrown down to the ground. Other than that it was an entertaining read. Glad to hear you liked it bob, and got it! Clarity's definitely been one of my weak points in comics, so I'll try looking out for that in future works!
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Bobert
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3 years ago
You did it, you got it out! It felt a little bit confusing to read in places like when Jiames wanted to surrender and in page 5 and 6, I didn't realise that Maoumi threw him up into the air and then he came back down in the last panel, I initially misread that as him being thrown down to the ground. Other than that it was an entertaining read.
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